Chapter 3: The First Echo

Chapter 3: The First Echo

The cold air bit at their exposed skin as they climbed higher, each breath forming small clouds that dissipated into the vast darkness. Liam's fingers had gone numb where they gripped the basket's edge, but he couldn't bring himself to let go. The physical discomfort was almost a relief—something concrete and real in a world that had abandoned logic.

"The controls aren't responding," he reported, his voice tight with controlled panic. He'd been working at the pilot station for what felt like hours, trying every combination of valves and switches he could identify. "Nothing's happening. We're not descending."

"Try pulling that red handle," Ty suggested desperately, pointing at a lever near the burner assembly. "Maybe it's an emergency release or something."

Liam yanked on it. Nothing. The balloon continued its inexorable climb, the automated burner firing with mechanical precision every few minutes, feeding them more altitude they didn't want.

"We're at ten thousand feet now," Matt said, reading the altimeter over Liam's shoulder. His voice carried the hollow tone of someone reporting their own death sentence. "How high can these things go before..."

He didn't finish the question. None of them wanted to think about the answer.

Reese hadn't moved from his position at the edge of the basket. He'd been staring down at the balloon below for nearly an hour now, his body swaying slightly with the basket's motion. The other balloon maintained its position exactly a thousand feet beneath them, its four occupants as motionless as before.

"Reese," Liam called. "Come help me with these controls. You're good with mechanical stuff."

"Look at them," Reese murmured, not turning around. "Just look how still they are. No panic, no fear. They've accepted it."

"Accepted what?" Ty snapped, his nerves finally fraying. "There's nothing to accept! This is some kind of weather phenomenon, or... or mass hallucination, or—"

"They know something we don't," Reese interrupted, his voice taking on that dreamy quality that made Liam's skin crawl. "Rick knew it too. That's why he smiled."

The burner fired again, bathing them in orange light, and Liam caught a glimpse of Reese's face in profile. His expression was serene, almost beatific, as if he'd found some kind of peace in their impossible situation.

"Reese, get away from the edge," Matt said, lowering his camera. He'd stopped filming minutes ago, the battery dying or perhaps just his will to document their descent into madness. "You're scaring us, man."

"Am I?" Reese turned slightly, just enough that they could see the strange smile playing at his lips. "Or are you scared because you haven't figured it out yet?"

"Figured what out?" Liam abandoned the controls, moving toward his friend. Something was wrong—more wrong than their impossible situation, more wrong than the duplicate balloons. Reese's eyes had taken on the same vacant quality that Rick's had shown just before he'd climbed over the edge.

"The pattern," Reese said softly. "Don't you see the pattern? Rick went first. Then it's our turn. One by one."

"That's not a pattern," Ty protested, but his voice shook. "That's just... Rick had some kind of breakdown. This situation would drive anyone—"

"Look at them down there," Reese continued, gesturing at the balloon below. "Four figures. Completely at peace. And look up there." He tilted his head toward the balloon above. "Four figures. Also at peace. We're the only ones still fighting it."

Liam followed Reese's gaze upward. The balloon above had drifted closer—maybe seven hundred feet now instead of a thousand. He could make out more details of the figures inside, and his stomach clenched with recognition. One of them was definitely tall and lean like himself, wearing what looked like his same dark jacket.

"Fighting what?" he asked, though part of him already knew he didn't want the answer.

"The fall," Reese said simply. "The beautiful, peaceful fall."

He swung one leg over the edge of the basket.

"No!" Matt lunged forward, grabbing Reese's arm. "What are you doing?"

Reese looked back at him with those empty, serene eyes. "What Rick did. What they all did. What we're all going to do, eventually."

"Get back in the basket!" Liam shouted, joining Matt in trying to pull their friend back to safety. But Reese's grip on the rim was surprisingly strong, his muscles locked with the same mechanical determination they'd seen in Rick.

"Look down there," Reese said conversationally, as if he weren't balanced on the edge of a ten-thousand-foot drop. "Count them. Four figures in the basket below us. But when I go, there will only be three. That's how it works. That's the pattern."

"You're having a breakdown," Ty pleaded, tears streaming down his face. "Just like Rick. This place is doing something to your mind. Fight it!"

Reese's smile widened. "This isn't a breakdown, Ty. This is clarity. Perfect, beautiful clarity."

He swung his other leg over.

"Reese, no!" Matt's voice cracked as he made one desperate grab for their friend's jacket.

But Reese was already letting go, his fingers releasing the basket's edge with the same calm deliberation Rick had shown. He dropped backward into the darkness, his face turned up toward them, that peaceful smile never wavering.

His scream—if he screamed at all—was swallowed by the wind and distance before it could reach them.

The three remaining friends rushed to the edge, staring down into the void where Reese had vanished. The balloon below continued its steady drift, and Liam counted the figures in its basket with mounting horror.

Three. There were only three figures now.

"No," he whispered. "That's not possible."

But it was. Where moments before there had been four motionless shapes in the distant basket, now there were only three. The space where the Reese-figure had stood was empty, as if it had never existed at all.

"This isn't real," Matt said, his voice high and strained. "This can't be real. People don't just... disappear from other balloons when someone jumps. That's not how reality works."

Liam's analytical mind was gibbering now, trying to process information that violated every natural law he'd ever learned. The balloon below wasn't just a visual duplicate—it was somehow connected to their basket, responding to their actions in real time.

"Look up," Ty whispered.

Liam didn't want to, but he forced himself to raise his eyes to the balloon above. It was closer now—maybe six hundred feet—and the figures inside had shifted position. Where before there had been four shapes, now one of them was moving toward the edge of the basket.

The tall, lean figure that looked like Liam was climbing over the rim.

"It's going to jump," Matt breathed. "My God, it's going to jump."

They watched in paralyzed horror as Liam's doppelganger swung its legs over the edge of the distant basket, mimicking Reese's final movements with mechanical precision. Its companions made no move to stop it, standing as motionless as mannequins while their friend prepared for his fall.

"Don't look," Ty said desperately. "Don't watch it happen."

But they couldn't look away. The figure above released its grip and began to fall, tumbling through the darkness between the balloons. As it passed their level, Liam caught a glimpse of its face—his own face, wearing an expression of absolute serenity.

The doppelganger continued its descent toward the balloon below, and Liam held his breath, waiting for the impossible impact. But as the figure reached the lower balloon's basket, it didn't crash into it.

It simply vanished, as if it had never existed.

"Three," Liam said numbly, counting the figures in the balloon above. "There are three left up there too."

The pattern was becoming clear, horrible and inexorable. Each time someone jumped from their balloon, the corresponding figure disappeared from both the balloon above and the balloon below. The three balloons were connected somehow, locked in a vertical dance of madness.

"We have to get out of here," Matt said, his documentary instincts finally overriding his shock. "We have to find a way down before we all..."

He couldn't finish the sentence.

The burner fired again, lifting them higher into the star-drunk sky, and Liam realized with crystal clarity that the controls weren't broken. They had never been meant to descend. This balloon—all the balloons—were climbing toward something, pulled upward by forces beyond their understanding.

Below them, three motionless figures waited in their duplicate basket.

Above them, three figures continued their patient vigil.

And in between, three friends huddled together against the cold, trying not to think about the beautiful, peaceful fall that seemed more appealing with each passing moment.

The altitude was affecting their thinking now, Liam realized. The thin air was making everything seem distant and dreamlike. Maybe that was how it worked. Maybe the lack of oxygen was part of the trap, slowly eroding their survival instincts until the fall seemed like the logical choice.

He forced himself to focus on the controls again, but the instruments seemed to be shifting and blurring before his eyes. The numbers on the altimeter were climbing steadily: eleven thousand feet, twelve thousand, thirteen thousand.

How high could they go before the cold and altitude finished what the psychological pressure had started?

Above them, something began to descend from the higher balloon.

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