Chapter 1: Miss Behavin'

Chapter 1: Miss Behavin'

The air in the trailer was thick with the ghost of yesterday’s fried bologna and the sharp, sour scent of stale beer. Caroline stood before the cracked sliver of a mirror taped to her bedroom door, pulling at the collar of her only nice blouse. It was thin and graying, but it was clean. That was more than she could say for most things in this tin-can home.

From the living room, her mother’s voice rasped through the particleboard walls, a litany of complaints aimed at a collection agency on the other end of the phone. "I told you, the check is in the mail! You people are vultures..."

Caroline flinched, her shoulders hunching towards her ears. She had to get out. Not just for the afternoon, but for good. The desire was a physical ache behind her ribs, a constant, low-grade fever that had burned for years.

Her eyes fell to the neatly folded classifieds section of the Oak Valley Chronicle on her lumpy mattress. One ad was circled in red pen.

Miss Behavin’ Burgers. Now Hiring! Are you a gal with gumption? Join our family! No experience necessary. Apply within.

Family. The word felt foreign on her tongue, a flavor she’d never tasted. It was enough. She grabbed her purse, a worn pleather thing with a broken zipper, and slipped out the flimsy trailer door before her mother could end the call and find a new target for her venom.

The walk from the dusty fringe of the trailer park to the town’s main street was like crossing into another country. Here, the lawns were manicured, the flags hung proudly from every porch, and the air smelled of cut grass instead of despair. Oak Valley was a town that prided itself on tradition, on knowing its neighbors, on a quiet, conservative rhythm.

And then she saw it.

Miss Behavin’ Burgers was an explosion of cheerful defiance on the corner of Elm and Main. It was a chrome-and-neon dream, a retro-styled diner painted in shades of hot pink and electric teal. A cheeky, winking cartoon waitress was painted on the window, holding a tray of impossibly perfect burgers. In a town of muted beiges and polite pastels, Miss Behavin’ was a beautiful, glorious scream. It looked like hope.

Taking a deep breath, Caroline pushed open the glass door. A small bell chimed merrily overhead. The inside was even brighter, a wonderland of sparkling red vinyl booths, a black-and-white checkered floor polished to a mirror shine, and the mouth-watering aroma of grilled meat and sweet milkshakes. Girls in crisp, matching pink and teal uniforms buzzed around the tables, their laughter mixing with the doo-wop music playing from a vintage jukebox.

It was perfect. Too perfect. A wave of nausea washed over her. What was she, a plain girl with mousy brown hair and thrift-store clothes, doing here? She was a weed trying to plant itself in a rose garden.

“Well, hello there, sugar.”

The voice was like warm honey and expensive whiskey. Caroline turned to see a woman leaning against the main counter, wiping it with a cloth. She was, in a word, dazzling. Her honey-blonde hair was styled in a perfect, immaculate wave. Her smile was wide and brilliant, full of teeth so white they seemed to glow. She wore a tailored crimson dress that clung to curves Caroline couldn’t even dream of having. This had to be Miranda.

“I… I’m here about the ad,” Caroline stammered, clutching her purse strap like a lifeline.

Miranda’s smile widened, and her eyes—warm, inviting eyes—crinkled at the corners. “I thought you might be. You’ve got that look.”

“What look?” Caroline asked, her face flushing with heat.

“The look of a girl who’s ready for a change,” Miranda said smoothly, setting down her cloth. She gestured to an empty booth. “Come on, sit with me for a minute. Tell me about yourself.”

The interview wasn’t an interview at all. It was a seduction. Miranda didn’t ask about work history or references. She asked about Caroline’s dreams, her fears. She leaned forward, her gaze intense and focused, making Caroline feel like she was the only person in the world. With an almost supernatural intuition, Miranda homed in on Caroline’s profound loneliness.

“This town can be tough on a girl who’s a little different,” Miranda said, her voice dropping to a conspiratorial whisper. “It’s easy to feel like you don’t have a place. I know I did. That’s why I built this diner. This isn’t just a business, Caroline. It’s a sanctuary. It’s a family for girls who need one.”

Every word was a balm on a raw, open wound. Caroline felt tears pricking at the corners of her eyes. She’d never had anyone speak to her with such kindness, such understanding. She found herself nodding along, her entire being screaming yes, yes, this is what I want.

It was then that the world tilted on its axis.

A waitress moved past their booth, heading toward the kitchen. She moved with an effortless, liquid grace that made the other girls seem clumsy by comparison. Long, chestnut hair swayed down her back. When she turned briefly to murmur something to another waitress, Caroline saw her face. It was a perfect, heart-shaped masterpiece, dominated by large, gentle brown eyes that held a universe of sadness and quiet strength.

She wore the same pink and teal uniform as the others, but on her, it looked like couture. She wasn’t just pretty; she was beautiful in a way that hurt to look at directly, like staring at the sun.

Caroline’s breath caught in her throat. She completely lost the thread of what Miranda was saying. Her focus narrowed until the only thing that existed in the universe was this woman. Who was she? What was her name? What did her voice sound like when she wasn't whispering?

“…so we like to think of ourselves as a real sisterhood here,” Miranda was finishing, her smile unwavering. She noticed Caroline’s gaze had drifted. She followed it to the retreating figure. “Ah. That’s Brenda. She’s my right hand. A very special girl.”

Brenda. The name was a perfect note of music. It echoed in the sudden, silent space of Caroline’s mind. Brenda.

Brenda paused by the kitchen door, picking up a stray napkin from the floor with a delicate, practiced movement. She glanced over her shoulder, her sad, beautiful eyes sweeping the diner. For a fraction of a second, her gaze met Caroline’s. There was no recognition, no real connection, just a fleeting, impartial glance. But to Caroline, it felt like a lightning strike. A jolt of pure, unadulterated electricity that shot from the crown of her head to the tips of her toes. In that brief moment, a seed was planted in the barren soil of her heart.

“You’ll start tomorrow. Eight a.m. sharp,” Miranda’s voice cut through the spell. “The uniform is in the back. We’ll get you fitted.”

Caroline blinked, turning back to Miranda. The job. She’d gotten the job. It was what she had wanted, what she had prayed for. The escape was real.

“Thank you,” Caroline managed, her voice a reedy whisper. “Thank you, Miranda. You won’t regret it.”

“Oh, I know I won’t, sugar,” Miranda said, her calculating eyes glinting. “I’m an excellent judge of character.”

Walking out of the diner and back into the oppressive afternoon heat, Caroline felt dizzy, weightless. She held the promise of her new life in her hands. A job. A purpose. A family.

But as she walked back towards the trailer park, her mind wasn't on the crisp new uniform or the escape from her mother’s suffocating presence. It wasn’t even on the charismatic, powerful Miranda.

Her thoughts were filled with the image of a melancholic girl with chestnut hair and eyes that held the rain. The seed of fascination, planted by that single glance, was already sprouting, twisting its roots deep into her soul. Escaping her old life suddenly seemed secondary. A new, far more potent desire had taken its place: to get closer to Brenda.

Characters

Brenda

Brenda

Caroline

Caroline

Miranda

Miranda