Chapter 3: The Unraveling
Chapter 3: The Unraveling
The first thing Mark Dalton registered upon waking was the cold. Not the chill of the autumn air, but a deep, arctic cold emanating from the other side of the bed. He cracked an eye open, his head throbbing with a dull, whiskey-induced ache. Jessica was sitting up, backlit by the glow of her phone, a rigid silhouette in the opulent, silver-and-cream bedroom that she had so meticulously decorated. Their pristine sanctuary.
“Jess?” he mumbled, his voice thick with sleep and guilt. “What’s wrong? Bad dream?”
She didn’t turn. Her voice, when it came, was terrifyingly calm. “I’m not the one who’s been having a dream, Mark. You have.”
He pushed himself up on his elbows, a knot of unease tightening in his stomach. “What are you talking about? Is this about that stupid Facebook thing? Some crazy bitch made a comment, it’s nothing.”
“The fat pig?” Jessica asked, still not looking at him. “The miserable old hag? Was that you being the upstanding family man you sell yourself as, Mark?”
“Come on, babe, I was just blowing off steam. The guy was setting off fireworks at 1 AM. I was defending the peace and quiet of our neighborhood.” He was already slipping into the familiar cadence of his own bullshit, the smooth, reasonable tone that had worked a thousand times before.
“And this Nora Vance?” Jessica finally turned her head, and the look in her eyes stopped his heart. The weary sadness was gone, replaced by something as hard and sharp as shattered glass. “Her comment. The one where she begged you to leave her alone.”
Mark forced a laugh. It came out as a strangled bark. “Her? Are you serious? Look at her! She’s clearly some deranged stalker, a lonely divorcee who made up a fantasy about me. You can’t possibly believe that.” He reached for her, ready to soothe, to placate, to gaslight. “You know me, Jess. You know I’d never—”
“Yes, I do,” she interrupted, pulling away from his touch as if he were diseased. “I know you’d lie. I know you’d cheat. And I know you’d be stupid enough to get caught. But I always thought it was with her.” She held up her phone, angling the screen so he could see the Facebook profile of Nora Vance, the stylish, confident woman he had so casually maligned.
Then, with a swipe of her thumb, the image changed.
“But it wasn't her, was it, Mark? It was Tiffany Bell.”
The name hit him like a physical blow. He stared at the screen, at the message thread open on Jessica’s phone. He saw Tiffany’s profile picture. He saw the blocks of text. He saw the attachments. His blood ran cold.
“What is that?” he croaked, his throat suddenly dry as dust. “Who sent you that? It’s fake. It’s photoshopped.”
“Oh, is this photoshopped?” Jessica’s voice was lethal. She tapped on an image, and a selfie filled the screen. It was him, smirking, his arm wrapped around Tiffany in a hotel room, a bottle of champagne on the table. The date stamp was clearly visible: August 14th. The weekend he was supposedly at a real estate conference in Dallas.
“And this?” she continued, her voice rising with each word, the pristine calm finally cracking to reveal the raw, cataclysmic rage beneath. She began to read from Tiffany’s confession. “‘He told me he was leaving you for me. He lied to us both.’ Sound familiar, Mark? Is that part of the script you use?”
“Jess, stop. Listen to me—”
“No, you listen!” she shouted, finally on her feet, the phone clutched in her hand like a weapon. “For two years! Two years she was sending me dates, times, hotel receipts! Scottsdale wasn’t a business trip, was it? And what about all those late-night ‘client dinners’? Was that Tiffany, too? The one you swore was just a colleague?”
The dam of his lies burst, and a torrent of panicked, pathetic denials poured out. “She’s lying! She’s a crazy ex, she’s trying to ruin me! Ruin us! It’s a conspiracy, can’t you see? Her and that Nora woman, they must be in it together!”
“Oh, you are pathetic,” Jessica spat, the words dripping with a contempt so profound it made him flinch. The beautiful, manicured room suddenly felt like a cage. The framed photos on the dresser—of their wedding, of their children, of their perfect life—seemed to mock him. “You get caught, red-handed, with evidence so absolute that a jury would convict you in five minutes, and your first instinct is to call the women you screwed over crazy. It wasn’t them, Mark. It was you. All of this is you.”
He saw the finality in her eyes. The untapped well of strength she possessed had been breached, and it was flooding their lives, washing away the foundation of deceit he had built. His arrogance evaporated, replaced by a primal, gut-wrenching panic.
“Jessica, please,” he begged, scrambling off the bed. “Don’t do this. Think about the kids. Think about our family. We can fix this. I’ll go to therapy, I’ll… I’ll do anything!”
“You should have thought of our family before you took that selfie,” she said, her voice dropping back to that icy calm. She walked over to the closet, pulled out a suitcase, and began throwing clothes into it with methodical, jerky movements. A pair of jeans. A sweater. Toiletries from the ensuite.
The sight of that suitcase broke him. “Where are you going?”
“To my sister’s,” she said, not looking at him. “And tomorrow morning, first thing, I’m calling a lawyer.”
“A lawyer?” The word was a death sentence. His image, his career, his carefully constructed world—all of it depended on the facade of the happy family man. A messy, public divorce would obliterate it. “No. You can’t.”
She zipped the suitcase with a sound that echoed like a gunshot in the silent room. She wheeled it to the door, pausing to look back at him one last time. He was just a man in his boxers, overweight and desperate, standing in the wreckage of his own making.
“I can,” she said. “Thanks to you, and Tiffany, and a complete stranger on the internet named Nora Vance… I finally can.”
Then she was gone. The front door slammed shut downstairs, and the silence that followed was heavier and more suffocating than any argument.
Mark stood, trembling, in the middle of their bedroom, a warzone of emotional shrapnel. His mind raced, searching for someone to blame, a focal point for his terror and rage. It wasn’t his fault. It couldn’t be. It was hers. The one who started it all. The catalyst. Nora Vance.
If she hadn’t posted that comment, Jessica would have never seen it. Tiffany would have never panicked. His life wouldn’t be imploding. He had to make her fix it. He had to make her take it back.
He lunged for his phone, his fingers stabbing at the screen. He found Nora’s profile in the Facebook thread and clicked ‘Message.’
- You need to fix this.
He stared at the screen. Sent. No reply. He typed again, his desperation escalating into a command.
- Take down your comment. RIGHT NOW. Tell Jessica it was all a stupid joke.
Sent. A single, infuriating grey checkmark appeared next to the message. It hadn’t even been delivered. He didn’t care. The words poured out of him, a toxic sludge of pleading and threats.
- You have no idea what you’ve done. You are ruining my life. My family. You are going to regret this, I swear to God.
He hit send again and again, his frantic messages firing off into the digital void, a barrage of impotent fury. He was screaming at a ghost, unaware that his target was 35,000 feet in the air, soaring over the dark ocean toward a paradise she had earned, leaving him alone in the hell he had created.
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Eleonora 'Nora' Vance

Jessica Dalton

Julian Croft
