Chapter 2: The Digital Detonation
Chapter 2: The Digital Detonation
While Nora Vance was buckling her seatbelt on a red-eye flight to Miami, the digital world she’d just abandoned was catching fire.
In the Crimson Creek Estates Community Facebook group, her comment lay beneath Mark Dalton’s brutish insults like a perfectly placed landmine. For a few minutes, there was only the stunned digital silence of a hundred suburbanites scrolling past in disbelief. Then, the first reaction appeared: a single, wide-eyed ‘wow’ emoji.
It was the first drop of rain before a hurricane.
- Susan Meyer: OMG. Is this for real??
- David Chen: I knew those 1 AM fireworks were a bad omen.
- Karen O’Malley: @Jessica Dalton you might want to see this.
That last comment, the tag that summoned the wife, was the equivalent of pouring gasoline on the flames. The notifications began to cascade, a waterfall of schadenfreude and morbid curiosity. Likes and shocked-face emojis piled up on Nora’s comment, burying Mark’s original insults under an avalanche of public judgment. The thread was no longer about fireworks.
Across town, in a master bedroom that smelled faintly of stale beer and broken promises, Jessica Dalton was wide awake. Mark had stumbled in an hour ago, reeking of cheap perfume and whiskey, muttering something about a “client dinner.” It was the same lie he’d been telling for years. Tonight, though, something felt different. The fabric of her denial, worn thin over time, was about to tear.
Her phone buzzed incessantly on the nightstand. She’d muted the Crimson Creek group notifications ages ago, but now, friends were texting her directly.
- Friend 1: Jess, are you seeing this?
- Friend 2: Don’t look at the neighborhood group. Call me.
- Friend 3: I am so, so sorry.
With a heart full of ice, she ignored their advice. Her fingers, trembling slightly, opened Facebook. She didn’t have to look far. The post was right at the top of her feed, a car crash of gossip she couldn’t look away from.
She read the initial complaint about the fireworks. Then Mark’s vile comments. Miserable old hag… fat pig. A familiar, weary shame washed over her. This was the man she was married to. This crude, angry bully.
Then she saw the reply. The one from a woman named Nora Vance.
- @Mark Dalton, darling, we talked about this. I told you it was over. I know you’re hurting…
Each word was a physical blow.
- You told me things were complicated at home, and I believed you…
The air left her lungs in a painful gasp. It was the public airing of her deepest, most private fear. For years, she had felt it—the late nights, the sudden secretiveness with his phone, the scent of another woman’s life clinging to his clothes. He had always managed to gaslight her, to twist her suspicions back on her, calling her crazy, jealous, insecure.
But here it was. In black and white, for all 2,347 members of their community to see.
Her thumb moved with a morbid autonomy, clicking on Nora Vance’s profile. A picture of a woman her own age, maybe a little older, smiled back. She was stylish, confident, with intelligent eyes and an unapologetic energy that radiated from the screen. She looked sharp. Witty. The kind of woman Jessica herself might have been if she hadn’t spent twenty years shrinking herself to fit into Mark’s world. The realization that Mark had cheated was a familiar wound. The realization that he had cheated with a woman like this—and then publicly insulted her—was a fresh, devastating humiliation.
Jessica’s world, the carefully constructed facade of the perfect family in the perfect house, didn't just crack. It shattered. The sound of her husband’s snoring from the other side of the king-sized bed was the most grotesque noise she had ever heard.
Five miles away, in a condo that was decidedly not in Crimson Creek Estates, Tiffany Bell stared at her own phone, her knuckles white as she gripped it. A ‘friend’ who enjoyed drama had sent her a screenshot.
“Isn’t this your guy? LOL.”
Tiffany’s blood ran cold. She was a member of the group—a lurker, keeping tabs—and she pulled up the thread herself. She scrolled past the fireworks and the insults, her eyes snagging on the name she’d never seen before. Nora Vance.
Who the hell was Nora Vance?
She read Nora’s comment, and a hot, possessive rage unlike anything she had ever felt surged through her.
- Darling, we talked about this.
- You told me things were complicated at home.
- Please… let me go.
The sheer audacity was breathtaking. Those were her lines. Those were the conversations she’d had with Mark, whispered over cheap wine in this very condo. Mark had promised her he was leaving Jessica. He’d said they had a future. He’d sworn Tiffany was the only one who understood him.
Had it all been a lie? Was he not just cheating on his wife, but cheating on his mistress too?
The thought of being replaced was one thing. But the thought of being replaced by this… this Nora, who then had the nerve to publicly discard him like yesterday’s trash, was an intolerable insult. Her jealousy wasn’t just about Mark anymore; it was about her own status. She had been the secret, the prize, the reason his marriage was ending. Now, this woman had stolen her narrative.
Tiffany’s mind raced, fueled by fury and a sense of profound betrayal. She had been a fool. Mark wasn’t going to leave his wife for her. He was just a pathetic, middle-aged man who collected women like baseball cards. And he’d just gotten sloppy.
Well, if her world was going to be upended, she wasn't going down alone. Mark wanted to burn his life to the ground? Fine. She’d provide the matches and the accelerant.
She had proof. Oh, God, did she have proof. Two years’ worth of it.
Her fingers flew across the screen, rage giving her a chilling clarity. She wasn't going to post in the group. That was messy, public. Amateurs did that. She was going to go directly to the source. She was going to prove to the wife, and to herself, that she was the real affair. She wasn't some phantom 'Nora.' She was Tiffany. And she had receipts.
She found Jessica Dalton’s profile. The woman was beautiful in a sad, elegant way. For a moment, Tiffany almost felt a pang of pity. She smothered it. This was war.
She opened Messenger and attached the first file. It was a screenshot of a text from Mark from just last week.
- Mark: Can’t stop thinking about last night. You’re intoxicating.
- Tiffany: And you’re married.
- Mark: Not for much longer. I promise. Just need to get my finances in order.
She attached another. A picture Mark had sent her from their "business trip" to Scottsdale—the same week he’d told Jessica he was at a real estate conference in Dallas.
Then she began to type. Her message was not an apology. It was a confession, a declaration, and an act of pure, unadulterated vengeance.
- “Jessica, you don’t know me, but my name is Tiffany Bell. I’ve seen the post in the community group, and I need you to know that this ‘Nora’ person isn’t the woman your husband has been sleeping with for the past two years. I am. He told me he was leaving you for me. He lied to us both. I’m done being his secret, and I’m done being lied to. You deserve the truth. Here it is.”*
She attached a dozen more screenshots. Texts with dates. Hotel receipts. A selfie of the two of them he’d sworn he’d deleted. She detailed dates, times, and places, a meticulous, soul-destroying timeline of his betrayal.
She hit send.
Back in her pristine, silent prison of a home, Jessica Dalton’s phone buzzed again. It wasn’t a text. It was a message request.
- From: Tiffany Bell.
- Jessica, you don’t know me, but…
Jessica’s finger hovered over the screen, a single, trembling digit separating her from the undeniable, catastrophic truth. The detonation was no longer just digital. It was about to become devastatingly real.
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Eleonora 'Nora' Vance

Jessica Dalton

Julian Croft
