Chapter 4: The Hill of Hesitation
Chapter 4: The Hill of Hesitation
The girl… she tastes just as good.
The words were not an echo in his memory; they were a brand on his soul. Elio scrambled away from the wall, a raw, guttural sound tearing from his throat. The cold in the room was receding, the shadows shrinking back to their mundane corners, but the psychic violation lingered, an oily residue coating the inside of his skull.
They were feeding on her. Now.
Rage, pure and undiluted, was a fire that vaporized the fog of his hangover. It burned away the self-pity, the guilt, the endless, navel-gazing misery. Liora’s manipulations, his infidelity with Chloe, his flight from his mother’s deathbed—all of it was kindling for this new, clean inferno. He had been a puppet, a fattened calf, a curated meal. But they had made a mistake. They had told him about Sarah.
He didn’t think. He acted. He snatched his keys from the bowl by the door and his wallet from the counter. On his way out, his eyes fell on the half-empty bottle of whiskey on the end table, the catalyst for his pathetic ritual. On pure, destructive instinct, he grabbed it and shoved it into his jacket pocket. A tool, a weapon, a poison. He didn't know what it was anymore, only that he might need it.
He slammed the apartment door behind him, not caring if it locked. The world outside was an assault of bright, meaningless daylight. People were walking dogs, carrying groceries, living lives that had not been touched by ancient, soul-eating parasites. The normality of it was obscene.
His beat-up sedan coughed to life, a stark contrast to the silent, funereal glide of Liora’s car. He didn’t have an address, didn't know where he was going, but a cold certainty guided him. Liora had called him a beacon. It was a two-way street. He focused on the memory of her, on the cold void he felt in her presence, and drove, letting the pull of that darkness guide him.
He navigated the city streets on autopilot, the engine groaning as he pushed it faster than it was meant to go. The familiar cityscape melted into the anonymous sprawl of the suburbs, and soon, he recognized the winding, tree-lined roads from the night before. The trees still seemed to claw at the air, their branches like skeletal fingers.
Then he crested a low hill, and his foot instinctively slammed on the brake.
Below him, nestled in a sprawling valley of unnaturally green lawn, was Liora's estate. It wasn’t a mansion; it was a fortress, a gothic monstrosity of dark stone and sharp, menacing gables that clawed at the sky. A high wall of the same stone encircled the property, topped with wrought-iron spikes. It looked like a cancer on the landscape, a piece of some older, crueler world that had metastasized into his own.
The sheer, oppressive reality of the place suffocated his rage. The fire in his gut sputtered, choked by a sudden, overwhelming wave of fear. This wasn't a house; it was a tomb. A lair. What was he, one broken man in a dying car, going to do? Kick down the door? They weren't human. They had feasted on his soul while he lay paralyzed, and Liora had orchestrated it all with the casual air of a hostess setting a table. He was a gnat planning to wage war on a hurricane.
His hands, which had been so steady, began to tremble on the steering wheel. The plan, so clear and righteous moments before, evaporated into a haze of insane futility. He could just turn around. Drive away. Call the police and sound like a lunatic. Drink himself into oblivion and pretend the whisper had never happened. The engine ticked quietly in the silence, mocking his paralysis. This was it. The Hill of Hesitation. The precipice where his courage failed.
His trembling fingers fumbled in his jacket and found the hard glass of the whiskey bottle. He pulled it out, the amber liquid sloshing inside. “Drowning it in ethanol and self-pity,” Liora’s voice sneered in his memory. She was right. This was his weakness, his crutch, the engine of his ruin.
But it was also the key. It was the only way he knew how to open the door.
With a ragged breath, he twisted the cap off. The acrid smell filled the car. He wasn't drinking to numb himself this time. He was drinking to break himself. He tilted the bottle back and took a long, desperate swallow, the cheap liquor burning a path of fire down his throat. He took another, then a third, chasing a state beyond fear, beyond reason.
The effect was instantaneous and violent. The world outside his windshield didn't slowly blur. It shattered. The trees, the stone fortress, the sky—it all dissolved into a staticky grey void. The hum of the car vanished, replaced by the high-pitched whine of astral travel. He was being pulled out, his consciousness stretched thin like a rubber band. But this time was different. His rage and his singular, desperate focus on his sister acted as a rudder in the psychic storm.
Sarah.
He wasn't falling aimlessly. He was moving with intent through a silent, disorienting dimension of raw emotion. It was a place of echoes, filled with the faint, ghostly lights of countless souls. But he ignored them, searching for the one light he would know anywhere.
There.
In the infinite distance, he saw it. Not a raging fire like his own anger, but a small, pure, and intensely bright flame, flickering bravely in the oppressive darkness. It was the light of her laughter, of her stubborn optimism, of every good memory they had ever shared. It was Sarah. A wave of love so fierce it was painful washed over him.
He pushed himself toward her light, propelled by a longing that transcended space and time. But as he drew closer, the beautiful sight turned into one of pure, unspeakable horror.
Looming over Sarah's light, so vast they blotted out the void behind them, were the twin shadows. The Echoes. Their milky-white eyes glowed with a soft, predatory light. They weren't attacking her flame; their actions were far more insidious. Long, inky tendrils, like wisps of solid smoke, reached down from their shifting forms and pierced the heart of her light. They were connected to her, feeding from her.
He could feel it. With every slow, rhythmic pulse, they siphoned her essence away. It wasn't a violent tearing; it was a slow, methodical draining. He felt a flicker of her confusion, a spark of her fear, a memory of their father’s face being drawn out and consumed. They weren’t just killing her. They were unmaking her, drinking her memories, her personality, her very soul, leaving behind a fading, empty shell.
The sight broke him. The vision shattered, and he was violently slammed back into his own body. He gasped, choking, the raw whiskey and acidic bile burning his throat. He was in his car. The fortress was still there. Nothing had changed, yet everything had.
The terror was gone. The hesitation was gone. The fear that had paralyzed him moments before had been superheated by the vision, forged into something harder and colder than steel. It was a rage so absolute it felt like serenity.
They were eating his sister alive.
He calmly placed the whiskey bottle on the passenger seat. His hands returned to the steering wheel, steady as a surgeon's. He was no longer a desperate man seeking answers. He was an executioner. He might be a gnat, but he would fly into the heart of the hurricane and he would bite.
Elio turned the key. The engine roared to life. Without a second's hesitation, he slammed the gas pedal to the floor. The tires screamed in protest as the car shot forward, hurtling down the hill, aimed like a bullet at the cold, wrought-iron gates of the House of Whispers. The war had begun.
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Elio Vance

Liora
