Chapter 1: The Comet's Shadow
Chapter 1: The Comet's Shadow
The night air was cool, a welcome relief from the stuffy confines of the university library. Kaelen Vance lay on his back on Observatory Hill, the grass damp beneath his thin jacket. Around him, the excited chatter of other students created a festive hum, a collective anticipation for a once-in-a-lifetime celestial event. Halley’s Comet. A smear of ethereal dust and ice against the canvas of infinity.
For Kaelen, it was a welcome distraction. The gnawing anxiety about his final exams, his uncertain future, and the quiet, persistent fear of simply fading into the background of his own life—it all seemed to shrink under the vastness of the cosmos. He just wanted one normal, memorable night. A small anchor in the turbulent sea of his early twenties.
"There it is!" someone shouted.
A wave of oohs and aahs swept across the hill as the comet blazed into its peak brilliance. It was beautiful, a silent, majestic wanderer. Kaelen felt a genuine smile touch his lips. For a moment, the quiet dread that was his constant companion receded.
Then, the world went white.
It wasn't a gentle glow; it was a percussive, invasive flash that seemed to bypass his eyes and detonate directly inside his skull. The collective gasp from the crowd was a distant, muffled sound. Kaelen’s body seized, a current of unknown energy coursing through him, hot and sharp. It felt less like an impact and more like… a download. An installation.
The light vanished as quickly as it came, leaving shimmering afterimages dancing in his vision. He sat up, his heart hammering against his ribs. The crowd was stirring, confused murmurs replacing the earlier excitement. "What was that? A meteor?" "Did anyone else feel that?"
Kaelen barely heard them. His attention was consumed by the impossible text now floating in his field of view. It was a crisp, translucent blue, hovering about a foot from his face, perfectly in focus no matter where he looked.
[Phobos System Initializing...]
[Calibrating to Host's Dominant Emotional Signature...]
He blinked hard, shaking his head. A stress-induced hallucination. A migraine aura. It had to be. He squeezed his eyes shut, his knuckles white. When he opened them again, the text was still there, now joined by a new line.
[Calibration Complete: Athazagoraphobia - The Fear of Being Forgotten, Forgetting, or Ignored.]
What the hell? The clinical diagnosis of his deepest, most private terror was unnerving. He had never even known there was a name for it.
[Welcome, Host. Your Terror is Now Your Strength.]
"No," Kaelen whispered, scrambling to his feet. "No, this isn't real."
He looked around frantically, but no one else seemed to see the ghostly interface. They were just confused students, already starting to pack up, their cosmic moment ruined by a freak atmospheric event. He was alone in this madness.
Panic began to claw its way up his throat. He stumbled away from the dissipating crowd, moving toward the shadowed path that led back to the main campus. He needed to get back to his dorm, to hide under the covers until the blue words went away.
He didn't notice the figures detaching themselves from the deeper shadows of the tree line until it was too late.
Two of them, dressed in plain black tactical gear with no identifying marks. They moved with a predatory silence that sent a jolt of primal fear through him. This was a different fear from the abstract dread in his soul; this was the immediate, sharp terror of a rabbit spotting a wolf.
"Kaelen Vance?" one of them asked. His voice was flat, devoid of emotion.
Kaelen didn't answer. He turned to run, but a third figure materialized behind him, blocking his escape. He was boxed in. His breath hitched, his mind racing. He threw a clumsy punch, a desperate, panicked swing that the first man caught effortlessly.
"We're not here to hurt you," the man said, his grip like a steel vise on Kaelen's wrist. "Only to collect you."
The second man raised a hand, and Kaelen saw the glint of a needle. He struggled, a surge of adrenaline giving him a burst of strength, but it was useless. He felt a sharp prick in his neck.
A cold, heavy numbness spread through his limbs instantly. His vision swam, the edges blurring to black. The last thing he saw before the world dissolved was the persistent blue text, mocking him from the center of his fading consciousness.
[System Alert: External Sedative Detected. Initiating Emergency Stasis...]
Then, nothing.
Consciousness returned not as a gentle dawn, but as a violent shove. Kaelen gasped, his lungs burning as if he hadn't breathed in days. He was lying on a floor of cold, unforgiving stone. The air was thick with the smell of ozone, damp, and something else… the metallic tang of fear.
He pushed himself up, his body aching. He was in a vast, cavernous hall, its ceiling lost in oppressive darkness far above. The architecture was brutalist and monolithic, all sharp angles and imposing stone, like a cathedral built to worship despair. Dozens of other people, maybe a hundred, were scattered across the floor with him, all slowly stirring with the same pained confusion. They were all young, mostly his age, dressed in the same simple grey fatigues he now found himself wearing.
Their old clothes were gone. Their phones were gone. Their lives were gone.
Clang.
A single, brilliant spotlight cut through the gloom, illuminating a raised dais at the far end of the hall. Standing in the center of the light was a man who seemed carved from granite and fury. He was tall and broad-shouldered, his dark grey instructor's uniform tailored to a perfect, severe fit. A web of old, white scars mapped his face, and his hair was cut in a brutally short military style. He radiated an aura of absolute, unbending order.
As he surveyed the room, Kaelen could almost see faint, golden lines of energy forming geometric patterns in the air around him, a cage of pure authority. This man was the source of the suffocating pressure in the hall.
"Awake?" the man's voice boomed, sharp and clear, cutting through the groans and whispers. "Good."
He began to pace the dais, his footsteps echoing like hammer blows. "Look around you. Look at the faces of your new comrades. Forget your names. Forget your families. Forget the pathetic, comfortable world you came from. It no longer has a place for you. Your old lives are over."
A wave of panicked murmurs rippled through the captives. A brave or foolish young man near the front stood up. "Who are you? Where are we? You can't do this!"
The instructor stopped pacing. He didn't even look at the man. "Rule Number One," he stated, his voice dropping to a dangerously calm level. "Unauthorized speech is forbidden."
The space around the standing man seemed to… thicken. He choked, clawing at his throat as if caught in an invisible grip. He was lifted a foot off the ground, his face turning purple, his legs kicking uselessly.
"He who breaks the rules," the instructor continued, his gaze sweeping over the horrified faces of the others, "is punished."
With a sickening crack of bone, the man was slammed back onto the stone floor, where he lay still and silent. A collective gasp of terror sucked the air from the hall.
The instructor resumed his pacing as if nothing had happened. "You are here because the comet's passing did more than entertain you. It ‘Awakened’ something inside you. A potential. A power born from the deepest, most primal part of your being: your fear."
His cold eyes seemed to find Kaelen's in the crowd, and for a terrifying second, Kaelen felt utterly seen, his soul laid bare.
"This is Aethelgard," the instructor declared. "The first and last bastion of humanity. And you are its newest Neophytes. Your purpose here is simple. You will be broken. You will be tested. You will be pushed to the very edge of sanity. You will confront the terror that now fuels you, and you will learn to wield it as a weapon."
He stopped at the edge of the dais, looking down on them like vermin. The golden lines around him seemed to pulse with power.
"Succeed, and you may live to become soldiers. Protectors. Fail…" He let the word hang in the air, heavy with unspoken violence. "Fail to control your power, fail to keep up, fail to prove your worth… and you will be culled."
The word echoed in the sudden, absolute silence. Culled. Not expelled. Not imprisoned. Culled. Like sick cattle. Like a harvest.
In Kaelen's vision, the blue text flickered, updating with a chilling new reality.
[New Objective: Survive.]
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Instructor Vorlag

Kaelen 'Kael' Vance
