Chapter 3: The Room They Built For You

Chapter 3: The Room They Built For You

The hallway yawned before her, a sliver of impossible architecture carved into the fabric of a normal suburban home. It wasn't just that it hadn't been there a moment ago; it was the quality of the darkness within it. It was a flat, light-devouring black, and the air that drifted out felt cold and stale, carrying the scent of old dust and something else, something metallic and vaguely like ozone.

Dahlia’s feet felt rooted to the plush living room carpet. Every instinct, every nerve ending screamed at her to turn, to bolt for the cheerful blue front door and run until the manicured lawns dissolved into the familiar grit of the city.

“Don’t be shy, dear,” Mary’s voice was a silken whisper right beside her ear. Dahlia hadn't even seen her move. One moment she was by the fireplace, the next she was standing so close Dahlia could see the unnatural perfection of her pores. The doll-like facade was cracking, her smile tightening at the corners, her eyes fixed on Dahlia’s mouth with an intensity that was no longer just unnerving—it was ravenous. “We just want to show you how much we’ve missed you.”

Her gaze was a physical weight, pressing against Dahlia’s lips. It was a look of appraisal, like a jeweler examining a flawed gem she intended to recut. Dahlia felt an involuntary urge to cover her mouth, to hide the alien prosthetic nestled against her gums. Mary’s eyes narrowed slightly, a flicker of something sharp and knowing in their depths. She could sense it. She could sense the foreign object, the piece of the puzzle that didn’t belong.

This was the obstacle: not just a physical trap, but a psychological one. They were trying to unnerve her, to break her down before the real horror began.

“Come now, Dahlia.” John’s voice was still layered with that salesman's charm, but it was wearing thin, the steel beneath beginning to show. He placed a hand on the small of her back. It was a casual, fatherly gesture that felt as binding as a shackle. The warmth of his palm was a lie; the pressure was unyielding, a firm, insistent force propelling her forward. She had no choice but to take a stumbling step into the unnatural corridor.

The moment she crossed the threshold, the world shifted.

The air grew thick and heavy, pressing in on her eardrums. The light from the living room seemed to bend and warp at the edges of the doorway, as if it were afraid to follow her in. The hallway itself was longer than it had any right to be, stretching into the gloom. A single, bare bulb hung from the ceiling far down the corridor, casting a sickly yellow light that made the floral-patterned wallpaper seem to writhe with diseased-looking vines.

Her action was simply to walk, propelled by John’s hand. With each step, a wave of vertigo washed over her. The floor felt soft and unstable, like walking on packed earth. She glanced back. John and Mary were behind her, their smiles now gone completely, replaced with expressions of grim satisfaction. The living room, visible through the doorway, seemed to shrink, the colors fading, the sounds muting, as if she were looking at it through the wrong end of a telescope.

Then came the sound. A soft, final click.

The doorway behind them had vanished. It was gone. In its place was more of the same writhing, floral wallpaper.

The trap was sprung.

The ticking in her chest, which had been a frantic but steady rhythm, exploded into a painful, chaotic pounding. It wasn't just a sensation anymore; it was a physical agony, a clockwork heart about to shatter its casing. The deadline was no longer an abstract concept. It was here. It was now.

“It’s a special room,” John said, his voice now stripped of all warmth. It echoed strangely in the narrow space, flat and dead. “A safe place. We had to be sure our investment was protected until the client arrived for collection.”

Investment. Client. Collection. The words hung in the stale air, confirming the most monstrous parts of Shelby’s letter. They didn't see a daughter. They saw a commodity. A soul on layaway.

“What’s in the room?” Dahlia asked, her voice a strained whisper.

It was Mary who answered, her tone dripping with a cruel, vindictive pleasure she no longer bothered to hide. “A piece of your childhood, dear. A crib. A mobile. All the things a good mother would provide.” Her eyes gleamed. “We need you to be in perfect condition. The Collector is very particular about the quality of its acquisitions.”

This was the turning point. The last shred of hope that this was some horrific misunderstanding was incinerated. They weren't going to hurt her, not in a way that would leave a mark. They were going to package her. They were going to walk her to the end of this impossible hall, lock her in a cage dressed up as a nursery, and wait for the shadow-thing to come and claim its prize. Her soul would be forfeit, her life a twenty-year prelude to an eternity of torment, and Shelby’s sacrifice would mean nothing.

Shelby. The thought of her adoptive mother, of the fierce, desperate love contained in that final letter, was a splash of ice water on the fire of her panic. The signatories must be rendered null and void. It wasn’t a suggestion. It was the only way. I have left you a weapon. The prosthetic felt impossibly large in her mouth, the sharp points of the canines pressing into her lower lip.

Her terror didn't vanish, but something else rose through it: a cold, crystalline fury. The quiet, observant university student, the girl who analyzed gothic literature, was gone. In her place was something cornered, something desperate. Something with teeth.

She stopped walking. John’s hand pushed against her back, harder this time. “Don’t be difficult, Dahlia.”

“The contract,” she said, the word feeling strange on her tongue. The sound of her own voice, steady and clear, surprised her. “It’s not valid if the signatories are in default.”

John laughed, a short, ugly bark. “Clever girl. Shelby’s influence, no doubt. But you’re a little late for legal arguments. There are two of us. And you…” He let the sentence hang, his meaning clear.

He was right. But he was also arrogant. His weakness, Shelby had written, was his supreme overconfidence. He saw a scared, helpless girl. He didn't see the weapon she carried. He didn't understand the nature of the sacrifice that had forged it.

She took a sharp, steadying breath. Mary was the fast one, the physical threat. John was the anchor, the one whose lie-detection had confirmed her position. He was closer. He was the one pushing her toward her doom. Her only chance, her only chance, was the element of surprise. She had to strike before they could react, before Mary’s unnatural speed could be brought to bear.

In that final, silent second, Dahlia Thorne made her choice. She would not be delivered. She would not be collected.

She spun on her heel, her body coiling like a spring, twisting out from under John’s hand. His eyes widened in genuine surprise, the first real emotion she had seen on his face.

It was all the opening she needed.

With a cry that was torn from the deepest, most primal part of her soul, she lunged.

Characters

Dahlia Thorne (known as 'Dolly' to her parents)

Dahlia Thorne (known as 'Dolly' to her parents)

John Thorne

John Thorne

Mary Thorne

Mary Thorne

Shelby Vance

Shelby Vance