Chapter 4: The Scent of Victory

Chapter 4: The Scent of Victory

Thursday morning found Chloe Sullivan standing in her kitchen, staring at a head of cabbage like it was a live grenade. The innocent green vegetable sat on her counter next to a carton of eggs that were three weeks past their expiration date—courtesy of Alex's "shopping list from hell."

"I can't believe I'm about to do this," she muttered, filling the largest pot she owned with water.

Mark appeared in the doorway, coffee mug in hand, his face a mask of barely controlled anxiety. "The kids are asking why we bought rotten eggs. What am I supposed to tell them?"

"Tell them we're... composting," Chloe said weakly, dropping the cabbage into the boiling water with a splash that sent droplets across the stovetop.

"Composting. Inside the house."

"It's for science."

Mark rubbed his temples. "Honey, I've been thinking about this all night. What if someone calls the health department? What if the real estate agent figures out what we're doing? What if—"

"What if we lose our home?" Chloe interrupted, her voice sharper than she intended. She immediately softened her tone. "Mark, I know this is crazy. But look around. Look at Emma's drawings on the refrigerator, at the height marks on the doorframe where we measured the kids every birthday. This isn't just a house we're fighting for."

As if summoned by her words, their youngest daughter wandered into the kitchen, rubbing sleep from her eyes. Emma stopped short when she saw the bubbling pot of cabbage, her nose wrinkling in confusion.

"Mommy, what smells funny?"

Chloe's resolve wavered for a moment. How could she explain to a five-year-old that Mommy was intentionally making their home smell terrible? That sometimes good people had to do questionable things to protect what mattered most?

"Just making some... special soup, sweetheart. Why don't you go watch cartoons with your brothers?"

Emma nodded and skipped away, apparently satisfied with this explanation. Children, Chloe reflected, had a wonderful ability to accept the inexplicable.

Mark, however, was not five years old.

"Special soup," he repeated flatly.

"Mark." Chloe turned to face her husband, the man who'd worked double shifts for five years to make their dream possible. "Mrs. Gable promised us this house. She looked me in the eye and promised. And now her son wants to steal that promise and sell it to the highest bidder."

She gestured around their kitchen—at the hand-painted backsplash they'd installed themselves, the cabinet doors Mark had repaired, the window garden where Emma grew cherry tomatoes.

"We've put our hearts into this place. Our savings, our sweat, our hopes. Are we supposed to just walk away because Richard Gable decided his mother's word doesn't matter?"

The cabbage water had turned an alarming shade of green-brown, and the smell was beginning to permeate the kitchen. Mark's expression shifted from anxiety to grim determination.

"What else is on Alex's list?"

Chloe consulted the crumpled paper Alex had delivered the night before. The handwriting was barely legible, but the intent was crystal clear.

"Fish oil in the heating vents. Ammonia solution sprayed in the basement to mimic cat urine. And..." She squinted at the next item. "Limburger cheese hidden in the walls?"

"Where are we supposed to get limburger cheese?"

"Already handled. Alex has connections."

Mark stared at his wife with a mixture of admiration and terror. "Who is this woman I married?"

"The same woman who spent three months learning to tile a bathroom because we couldn't afford to hire someone. The same woman who's fought for every good thing our family has." Chloe's voice caught slightly. "The same woman who refuses to let some entitled rich boy destroy our children's security."

By ten AM, the Sullivan house had been transformed into an assault on every sense. The cabbage soup—if it could still be called soup—had achieved a smell that suggested something had died and been forgotten for weeks. Chloe had carefully ladled portions into containers and hidden them in strategic locations: behind the water heater, under the kitchen sink, in the back of bedroom closets.

The expired eggs had met their fate in the bathroom drains, where they'd been mixed with hot water and left to create their own special perfume. The smell was immediate and nauseating—exactly what Alex had promised.

"Jesus," Mark gasped, emerging from the basement where he'd just finished spraying diluted ammonia solution in corners and behind the furnace. "It smells like a barn down there."

"A barn where something terrible happened," Chloe agreed, trying not to breathe through her nose.

The visual assault was proving equally effective. Following Alex's detailed instructions, they'd borrowed the most hideous furniture they could find from friends and relatives. Mark's brother had contributed a plaid recliner with stuffing coming out of the arms. Chloe's sister had provided a coffee table made from a tree stump and painted neon green. Mrs. Higgins had donated several ceramic garden gnomes and a lamp shaped like a rooster.

The living room now looked like a garage sale had exploded in it. Every surface was cluttered with mismatched decorations, outdated electronics, and what Alex had called "visual chaos." The children's toys—usually neatly organized—were scattered everywhere, creating an obstacle course of plastic and noise.

"It looks like we live in a flea market," ten-year-old Jake observed, surveying the transformation with the brutal honesty of childhood.

"That's the point," Chloe said, adjusting a particularly ugly throw pillow covered in sequined peacocks.

The afternoon brought Alex herself, along with a pet carrier containing three of the largest, most vocal cats Chloe had ever seen.

"Temporary residents," Alex announced, setting the carrier down in the living room. "Mrs. Peterson says they're very... expressive."

As if on cue, one of the cats let out a yowl that sounded like a smoke alarm having an existential crisis. The other two joined in, creating a harmony that could probably be heard from space.

"They're not actually going to be here during the open house, right?" Mark asked nervously.

"Of course not. But their presence needs to be... established." Alex produced a spray bottle filled with what looked like water but smelled distinctly fishy. "Eau de Cat. A little spritz here and there, some strategically placed litter boxes, and voilà—instant cat lady reputation."

Emma was delighted by the temporary feline visitors, squealing with joy as the largest cat—a massive orange tabby named Sergeant Whiskers—allowed her to pet his considerable bulk. The other children were equally charmed, which made Chloe feel slightly better about the chaos they were creating.

"At least someone's enjoying this," she muttered, watching her youngest son try to teach the cats to high-five.

"Mom," twelve-year-old Sarah appeared at her elbow, looking troubled. "Jenny's mom drove by earlier and said the house looks 'different.' She seemed... concerned."

Chloe's stomach dropped. Word was spreading through the neighborhood, and not all of it would be friendly. "What did you tell her?"

"That we were... redecorating?"

"Good girl."

But as the afternoon wore on, Chloe found herself struggling with what they were doing. Every horrible smell, every ugly decoration, every element of chaos felt like a betrayal of the home she'd worked so hard to create. This was the place where she'd nursed babies, where Mark had taught the children to ride bicycles, where they'd celebrated birthdays and holidays and all the small moments that made a house a home.

Her breaking point came when she found herself standing in Emma's bedroom, spray bottle in hand, preparing to make her daughter's sanctuary smell like a combination of rotten fish and industrial cleaner.

"I can't do this," she whispered, her hands shaking.

Mark appeared behind her, having apparently followed her upstairs. "Hey. Talk to me."

"This room," Chloe said, gesturing helplessly at the pink walls decorated with Emma's artwork, the carefully organized bookshelf, the stuffed animals arranged just so on the bed. "This is where she feels safe. Where she has tea parties with her dolls and tells me about her dreams. How can I make it smell like... like..."

"Like we need to," Mark said gently, taking the spray bottle from her hands. "Because if we don't, she won't have this room at all."

He was right, and Chloe knew it. But knowing something intellectually and accepting it emotionally were two different things entirely.

"What if this doesn't work?" she asked. "What if we destroy our home for nothing?"

Mark was quiet for a moment, looking around Emma's room—their room, in a house that had sheltered their family for eight years.

"Then at least we'll know we fought for it," he said finally. "At least we'll know we didn't just roll over and let some rich bastard steal our children's future."

Twenty minutes later, Emma's room smelled like a fish market, and Chloe was crying into a dish towel while Mark rubbed her shoulders.

"It's temporary," he kept saying. "All of this is temporary. Saturday comes and goes, we get the house, and then we spend Sunday making everything right again."

"And if we don't get the house?"

Mark's arms tightened around her. "Then we figure out Plan B. But first, we give Plan A everything we've got."

By evening, the transformation was complete. The Sullivan house—the home they'd loved and nurtured for nearly a decade—had become a sensory nightmare. It smelled like death, looked like chaos, and sounded like a barnyard thanks to the borrowed cats who seemed determined to express their opinions about the situation at maximum volume.

The children had adapted with the resilience of youth, playing elaborate games that involved navigating the obstacle course of hideous furniture while avoiding the "smell zones." They seemed to think the whole thing was an extended practical joke, which wasn't entirely wrong.

As Chloe tucked Emma into bed—in a room that now smelled like low tide—her daughter looked up with curious eyes.

"Mommy, are we really going to keep living like this?"

Chloe smoothed her daughter's hair, choosing her words carefully. "No, sweetheart. This is just temporary. Sometimes grown-ups have to do silly things to solve big problems."

"Like the time Daddy fixed the toilet by hitting it with a hammer?"

"Exactly like that."

Emma seemed satisfied with this explanation and drifted off to sleep, apparently unbothered by the aromatic chaos surrounding her.

Later, as Chloe and Mark lay in their own bed—trying to breathe through their mouths—Chloe's phone buzzed with a text from Alex.

How did today go?

Chloe typed back: House smells like hell. Looks worse. Kids think we've lost our minds. Pretty sure we have.

Perfect. Tomorrow we add the finishing touches. Then Saturday, we see what Richard Gable is really made of.

Chloe set her phone aside and stared at the ceiling. Tomorrow would bring more chaos, more preparation for what Alex had started calling "Operation Home Sweet Home."

But tonight, lying next to her husband in the house they'd fought to make theirs, Chloe felt something she hadn't expected amid all the artificial chaos: peace.

They were fighting for their family. They were fighting for their future. And sometimes, fighting meant making your home smell like a sewage treatment plant.

If that's what it took to keep their promise to Mrs. Gable—and more importantly, to keep their promise to their children—then so be it.

The war was almost here.

Characters

Alexandra 'Alex' Vance

Alexandra 'Alex' Vance

Chloe & Mark Sullivan

Chloe & Mark Sullivan

Richard Gable

Richard Gable