Chapter 3: What the Fog Hides
Chapter 3: What the Fog Hides
Jack barely slept that night. Every time he closed his eyes, he heard the methodical crack of branches, felt the weight of unseen eyes tracking his movement along the highway. By 4:30 AM, he gave up on rest entirely and sat at his kitchen table with black coffee, watching the darkness outside his window and making a decision that felt both necessary and insane.
He was going to patrol his route before dawn. Without a call. Without authorization.
If something was taking the animals before he could arrive at the reported scenes, then he needed to be out there first. Waiting. Watching. The logic felt solid in the pre-dawn quiet of his kitchen, even if Tracy would fire him for unauthorized use of county equipment.
Jack dressed in the darkness, pulling on his heavy work clothes and steel-toed boots. The county truck started reluctantly in the cold, its diesel engine coughing to life like an old man clearing his throat. He let it warm up while he checked his equipment—standard road maintenance gear, nothing that would help him if his growing suspicions proved correct. But what exactly would help him? What tools did you bring to confront the impossible?
The dashboard clock read 5:15 AM as he pulled out of his driveway. Route 340 lay twenty minutes away, sleeping under a blanket of November fog that had rolled in during the night. Jack drove through empty streets, past darkened houses where normal people slept normal sleep, unburdened by the weight of mysteries they couldn't solve.
By the time he reached his route, the fog had thickened to an impenetrable wall. Jack had seen plenty of Virginia fog over the years—the kind that hugged creek beds and filled hollows, that reduced visibility to a few dozen yards and made morning commutes treacherous. But this was different. Denser. More complete.
This fog swallowed the world.
Jack pulled onto the highway and immediately had to slow to a crawl. His headlights penetrated maybe ten feet before being absorbed by the gray mass that surrounded him like cotton. The familiar landmarks of his route—mile markers, guardrails, the distinctive curve at Miller's Creek—all vanished into the murk. He might as well have been driving through space.
He crept forward at fifteen miles per hour, following the yellow centerline like a lifeline. The fog pressed against his windshield with an almost physical presence, so thick it seemed solid. No wind stirred it. No gaps revealed the landscape beyond. Just uniform gray that muffled even the sound of his engine.
At what he judged to be mile marker 111, Jack pulled over and stopped. He couldn't see the marker itself, couldn't see his own hood ornament for that matter, but years of driving this route had given him an instinctive sense of distance and location. If something was going to happen, it would be soon. Between markers 108 and 115, in that section where the woods pressed closest to the highway.
He sat in the cab with the engine idling, windows cracked despite the cold so he could listen for sounds beyond the diesel rumble. The fog seemed to absorb everything—no bird calls, no rustle of wind through bare branches, no distant traffic on parallel roads. The silence was as complete as the gray wall surrounding him.
Then he saw the fox.
It appeared in his headlight beam like a photograph developing in slow motion. A red blur at first, then gradually resolving into a familiar shape. The animal lay in the center of his lane, maybe twenty feet ahead—close enough to see clearly despite the fog, but far enough away that it took Jack's eyes a moment to process what he was looking at.
The fox was freshly dead. No blood that he could see, no obvious trauma, but it lay with the loose, boneless sprawl that only came with recent death. Steam rose from its russet fur in the cold air, wisps of vapor that mixed with the surrounding fog and disappeared.
Jack's hands tightened on the steering wheel. This was it. This was what the callers had been seeing—fresh kills on the highway, still warm, still bleeding. But he'd arrived first this time. Whatever had been cleaning up before he got there would have to—
Movement in the fog.
Something darted across his headlight beam, low to the ground and impossibly fast. Jack caught just a glimpse—a hunched silhouette that moved with predatory purpose, there and gone in the space between heartbeats.
His blood turned to ice water.
The figure reappeared at the edge of his vision, approaching the fox with quick, twitchy movements that hurt to watch. Even through the fog, Jack could see it wasn't human. Wasn't animal either, at least not any animal he recognized. It moved wrong, all sharp angles and jerky motions, like footage of a spider played at double speed.
Jack should have hit the horn. Should have gunned the engine or turned on his emergency lights or done something to scare the thing away. Instead, he sat frozen, watching as the figure reached the fox and crouched over it.
What happened next defied every law of physics Jack understood.
The creature—and it was definitely a creature now, something with too many joints and proportions that made his brain ache—scooped up the fox in one fluid motion and straightened. But instead of lifting thirty pounds of dead weight, it moved as if the fox weighed nothing at all. As if it were hollow.
Then it looked directly at him.
Even through the fog, even across twenty feet of highway, Jack felt the weight of its attention like a physical blow. He couldn't make out features—the fog and darkness obscured too much—but he knew with absolute certainty that he was being studied. Evaluated. The creature held the fox in what might have been arms, perfectly still, perfectly silent.
Jack's foot found the gas pedal without conscious thought. The truck lurched forward with a roar of diesel engine, headlights sweeping across empty asphalt. The creature was gone. The fox was gone. Even the steam that had been rising from the warm fur had vanished, leaving no trace that anything had been there at all.
He drove through the fog for another mile before his hands stopped shaking enough to pull over. The truck's cab felt like a sanctuary, steel and glass between him and whatever lived in the gray world outside. Jack sat with the engine running and the heater blasting, but he couldn't get warm.
That hadn't been an animal taking roadkill. It had been something else entirely, something that moved without sound and lifted weight without effort. Something that could make a thirty-pound fox disappear as completely as if it had never existed.
The fog began to lift as dawn approached, revealing the familiar landscape of his route in patches and glimpses. Normal woods. Normal highway. Normal mile markers standing at regulation intervals. But Jack knew now that normal was an illusion, a thin veneer over something much stranger and more terrible.
By the time he reached the maintenance building, the fog had burned off entirely under a pale November sun. Jack sat in the parking lot for twenty minutes, trying to construct a report in his head. Trying to find words for what he'd witnessed that wouldn't get him fired or committed.
In the end, he filed nothing. No incident report, no maintenance log entry, no mention of unauthorized patrol or creatures in the fog. He went through the motions of his regular day, checking equipment and updating paperwork, but his mind kept returning to that moment when predatory attention had focused on him through the gray morning air.
Whatever was taking the animals from Route 340, it knew he was watching now. It had seen him as clearly as he'd seen it, and something in that exchange felt like a line being crossed.
Jack had spent his career cleaning up after other people's mistakes—accidents and collisions, the inevitable friction between human plans and natural forces. But this was different. This was something that planned, something that hunted with intelligence and purpose.
And now it knew his name.
That night, Jack double-checked the locks on his doors and left every light in the house burning. But even surrounded by the familiar comfort of his own space, he couldn't shake the feeling that the fog hadn't really lifted at all. That it was still out there, just beyond the reach of his vision, waiting with infinite patience for him to venture back into its domain.
The creature in the gray had shown him a glimpse of something vast and organized, something that turned Virginia highways into hunting grounds and roadkill into carefully orchestrated vanishing acts. And Jack Riley, county maintenance technician, had stumbled into the middle of it armed with nothing but a pickup truck and thirty years of experience fixing potholes.
It should have been laughable. Instead, it felt like a death sentence.
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