Chapter 1: The Spark of Insult

Chapter 1: The Spark of Insult

The digital world was Alex Carter’s ocean, and he was its most patient fisherman. From the command center of his sparse apartment, bathed in the cool blue glow of three monitors, he cast his nets into the churning chaos of online marketplaces. They weren't nets of rope and twine, but of code and meticulously crafted search algorithms. He wasn't hunting for fish, but for value—the glint of gold in mountains of digital detritus.

To the outside world, he was just another reseller, a flipper. But in the quiet hum of his servers, he was 'Ghost.' A name earned for his ability to appear, strip an undervalued asset, and vanish before the market even knew what it had lost. Tonight’s prey was a school of scientific calculators. Specifically, 200 units of the TI-84 Plus, listed as a single bulk lot. The photos were grainy, the description lazy, but the price was almost criminally low. It was the kind of listing that made his pulse quicken. A quick flip, easy profit. Enough to pay rent for the next three months.

His fingers danced across the keyboard, his eyes scanning the seller’s profile: ‘Vipertek.’ Feedback score: 98.7%. High, but not perfect. Alex had learned long ago that the devil wasn't in the 98 positive reviews, but in the single negative one. He scrolled, ignoring the glowing praise and seeking the poison. He found a few neutral comments, complaints about slow shipping, nothing major. Still, something felt off. A professional operation wouldn't use such low-quality photos for a lot worth thousands.

Alex’s methodology was built on one principle: eliminate all variables. He typed a simple, polite message, the kind he’d sent a thousand times before.

“Hello, I’m interested in your bulk lot of TI-84 calculators. Could you please confirm if they have been tested and if the battery compartments are free of corrosion? Thank you for your time.”

He hit send and leaned back, stretching his arms over his head. The message was a probe. A professional would give a straight answer. A lazy seller might be vague. A scammer would be too eager. The reply came back in less than a minute, an alert pinging softly in his headset. The speed was unusual. The content was unbelievable.

“Don’t waste my time with stupid questions. If you can’t tell what you’re buying from the pictures, you’re too broke to afford it anyway. Go ask your mommy for an allowance. People like you are a plague on this site.”

Alex stared at the message, his mind momentarily blank. It wasn't just rude; it was dripping with a bizarre, unprovoked venom. He felt a familiar, cold prickle on the back of his neck. It was the same feeling he’d gotten years ago, when a slick online vendor sold him a pallet of “new” hard drives that turned out to be refurbished and wiped with military-grade software, making them worthless bricks. That experience had cost him everything he had. It had also forged him into the Ghost. He’d spent the next six months not just learning the rules, but mastering their weaponization. He’d found a loophole in the platform’s international shipping policy and systematically dismantled that scammer’s business, report by irrefutable report, until the account was permanently banned and his funds blacklisted.

He had learned his lesson: never let a bully have the last word.

This ‘Vipertek’ had no idea who he was talking to. He wasn't just some kid asking for an allowance. Alex was the guy who could find the digital skeleton you forgot you buried in the server logs of a website that went defunct in 2008.

His fingers flew again, not in anger, but with the chilling precision of a surgeon preparing for an operation. The desire for the calculators evaporated, replaced by a much more primal hunger: justice. He wasn't interested in Vipertek’s feedback score anymore. He clicked on the option to see ‘Feedback left for others.’

It was a sewer.

For a buyer with a vaguely Spanish-sounding surname who’d complained about a broken item: “Maybe if you learned to read English you’d know it was sold AS-IS. Enjoy your paperweight, moron.”

For a user with an Asian profile picture who had asked a question about shipping costs: “I don’t have time to haggle with your kind. Go back to whatever flea market you crawled out of.”

For a buyer who left a four-star review instead of five: “UNGRATEFUL WRECK. BLOCKED. DO NOT SELL TO THIS IDIOT.”

The list went on and on. A litany of racist, classist, and astonishingly hateful screeds, all directed at anyone Vipertek deemed beneath him. This wasn't a seller having a bad day. This was a predator, a digital tyrant hiding behind a screen, using his power on the platform to abuse people he knew couldn't fight back. The 98.7% rating was a lie, a facade built on bullying buyers into submission, scaring them away from leaving the negative feedback they deserved for fear of vicious, public retaliation.

Alex felt the cold knot in his stomach tighten into a diamond-hard point of resolve. This was no longer about a rude message. This was about a pattern. A sickness. Vipertek wasn't just a bully; he was a symptom of a rot that festered in the dark corners of the internet, a place where anonymity gave monsters license to be cruel without consequence.

But there were always consequences. You just had to know which levers to pull.

He leaned forward, his reflection a pale specter in the dark screen. The thrill of the hunt returned, sharper and more exhilarating than any search for profit. He was no longer fishing for calculators. He was hunting a viper.

Alex blocked Vipertek’s account, not to hide, but to close the communication channel. The Ghost worked in silence. Then, he right-clicked on Vipertek’s profile page and selected ‘View Page Source.’ A cascade of HTML and Javascript filled one of his monitors. To anyone else, it would be an incomprehensible wall of text.

To Alex, it was the first crack in the serpent’s egg. The hunt had begun.

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Alex 'Ghost' Carter

Alex 'Ghost' Carter

Maya Singh

Maya Singh

Victor 'Viper' Vance

Victor 'Viper' Vance