Chapter 10: Your Pin is Ready

Chapter 10: Your Pin is Ready

The world outside the window was a silent, moving photograph from a madman’s album. David’s mind, the rational, architectural mind that understood blueprints and load-bearing walls, fractured completely. The creature standing on Jake’s lawn was a living violation of physics and sanity. It was taller than the streetlamp, a pillar of stitched-together darkness that seemed to drink the light around it, leaving the air feeling thin and cold. The glinting pins that studded its form were not decorations; they were integral, like scales on a reptile or thorns on a twisted vine. He recognized the shape from Maisyn’s frantic, childish drawings, but the reality was infinitely more terrible. This was the presence he had felt behind him in Maisyn’s room. This was the unseen guest that had made the kitchen chair creak.

Jake made a choked, guttural sound, a noise of pure animal terror. The silver safety pin, the one that had been his personal omen, slipped from his numb fingers. It hit the polished hardwood floor with a tiny, tinny clatter that was obscenely loud in the humming silence. He stumbled backward, away from the window, his face a waxy, sweat-sheened mask of disbelief.

David was frozen, but his mind was screaming. He was looking at the predator that had circled his grieving wife, the monstrous ‘friend’ who had promised to help with her ‘grey days’. He was staring at the curator of the collection box, the being that had cataloged the lonely children of his town and summoned them here like a dark shepherd calling his flock. This wasn't just a monster. This was his monster. It had been his family’s monster all along.

The being, Mr. Pins, tilted its featureless head. The motion was slow, fluid, like a cypress branch bending in a deep-sea current. It was an expression of curiosity, of appraisal. Its non-gaze swept over the house, and David felt it pass over him like a cold shadow, a moment of intimate, terrifying recognition. It knew he was watching. It had known all along. This entire spectacle was for him.

Maisyn, however, felt no fear. She was bathed in the creature’s silent glory, a devout parishioner before her god. Her small body trembled with a joy so profound it was terrifying.

Then, she moved.

She turned from the window and her hand shot out, seizing David’s wrist. The strength in her small fingers was shocking, unnatural. It wasn’t the grip of a seven-year-old; it was a cold, constricting force, like a band of iron tightening around his bones. He tried to pull back instinctively, but her hold was absolute. He was anchored to her, and she was anchored to the thing on the lawn.

"Come on, Daddy!"

Her voice was bright, ecstatic, the sound of a child on Christmas morning who has just received the one gift she wanted more than anything in the world. But layered beneath that childish glee was the cold, resonant echo of the entity, a chilling harmony that made the hair on David's arms stand on end.

She tugged him forward, pulling him closer to the window, to the terrible tableau outside. Her eyes, wide and shining, locked onto his. They held a terrifying, misplaced love, the earnest desire of the converted trying to save the unsaved.

"He wants to give you your pin now."

The words struck David with the force of a physical blow. He saw it in his mind’s eye with blinding clarity: the long, black-headed hat pin from the collection box, the one identical to the needle he’d stepped on in his own bedroom. The one with the crisp, new slip of paper bearing his name. David. This was the moment. The ceremony. The induction.

"He says you've been lonely long enough," Maisyn whispered, her expression softening into one of profound, terrible sympathy. It was the same look she’d given him in the living room, the pity of the predator for the prey it was about to put out of its misery.

Lonely. The word was a key, unlocking the final door of his understanding. His grief over Savannah, his isolation, his quiet desperation—it hadn’t just made him vulnerable. It had been a beacon, a signal fire in the dark that had drawn this thing to him, just as it had been drawn to his wife. Mr. Pins wasn't a random horror; he was a specialist. He fed on sorrow, and their family had been a feast.

At Maisyn's words, as if on a silent, universal command, the children in the yard moved.

Every single head in the circle turned in perfect, horrifying unison. The smooth, robotic motion was identical to the one in his backyard, but amplified by their numbers, it was infinitely more chilling. Dozens of small faces, from Liam’s to Chloe’s to others he only vaguely recognized from the school pickup line, all turned to face the house. To face him. Their faces were utterly blank, their eyes wide and vacant, reflecting the sickly light of the streetlamp like polished stones. They were no longer children; they were a collective, a chorus line for a nightmare, their individual wills hollowed out and replaced by the single, monstrous purpose of their master.

David’s breath hitched. His heart felt like it was going to tear its way out of his chest. He was trapped between his paralyzed brother behind him and a cult of possessed children in front of him, his hand locked in the unbreakable grip of his own daughter, who was trying to lead him to his damnation.

Then came the sound.

It started as a low vibration, a hum that seemed to emanate from the towering figure of Mr. Pins itself. It grew, not in volume, but in texture, resolving into a complex, layered noise that scraped at the inside of David’s ears. It was the sound of a thousand tiny, sharp things rubbing together. It was the dry, metallic skittering of countless needles. It was the sound of rustling, brittle paper. It was the sound of every pin in the collection box, every pin on the creature's body, vibrating at once.

It was the sound of laughter.

It was a dry, sharp, piercing sound, devoid of all humor and joy. It was the sound of an ancient, alien thing mimicking a human emotion it could only understand as a collection of sharp edges. The sound filled the air, the house, David's head, a cacophony of needle-points scraping against bone.

Maisyn beamed, her face alight with triumph as the terrible laughter washed over them. She tightened her grip on his wrist, pulling him insistently toward the front door.

"Don't be afraid, Daddy," she said over the horrifying sound, her voice full of love. "It'll only hurt for a second. Then we can all be together. No more grey days. Not for you. Not for anyone."

He was at the precipice. Before him, the monster waited, its silent, smiling invitation hanging in the air. In his hand, his daughter, his beautiful Maisyn, offered him a choice that was no choice at all: join them in their blissful, hollow unity, or fight. Fight, and risk losing her forever to the thing that wore her face. Fight, and remain utterly, terrifyingly alone.

The laughter of a thousand needles scraped on, and David stood frozen, a scream trapped deep in his throat, his world reduced to the impossible pressure of his daughter's hand pulling him toward the dark.

Characters

David

David

Maisyn

Maisyn

Mr. Pins (The Pin Collector)

Mr. Pins (The Pin Collector)