Chapter 3: The Ghost Corporation
Chapter 3: The Ghost Corporation
The next three days were a masterclass in frustration. Leo Grant, true to his word, had dissected Alina’s financing agreement with the grim focus of a surgeon performing an autopsy. The news was not good.
"It's a work of art," he told her, his voice flat with grudging respect. He was leaning back in his chair, the rumpled suit now a permanent part of his aesthetic. "A predatory masterpiece. Clause 14B, the 'payment discrepancy' clause, is intentionally vague enough to cover almost anything. A processing delay on their end, a check that takes a day too long to clear… they can claim a 'discrepancy' and trigger the repo. It's unethical, it's unconscionable, but is it illegal? Probably not."
Alina sat across from him, her hands clenched in her lap. "So that's it? He can just do this?"
"He's insulated himself, Ali," Leo explained, gesturing at the printout of the contract, which was covered in his frustrated red ink. "Every 'i' is dotted, every 't' is crossed. To fight this head-on would mean challenging the contract's validity, and Thorne would bleed us dry in court before we ever saw a judge. He’s counting on that. It's cheaper for his victims to just pay the exorbitant 'recovery fees' and get their cars back."
The wall of law was thicker and higher than she had imagined. Leo was hitting legal dead ends, his initial spark of interest smothered by the grim reality of Thorne’s carefully constructed fortress. He was fighting by the book, but Marcus Thorne had written the book to ensure he always won.
Defeated, Alina returned to her small apartment. The missed Innovatech opportunity loomed over her like a specter. An overdue rent notice lay on her counter, a stark white reminder of her dwindling finances. She stared at the packet of ramen, the planned dinner for the evening, and a cold, hard knot of spite formed in her stomach.
Leo was a lawyer. He had to think like a lawyer, confined by precedent and procedure. But Alina was a designer. She solved problems by looking at them from different angles, by deconstructing the entire framework, not just the text within it. Thorne had built a legal fortress. Fine. She wouldn't try to knock down the walls. She would check the foundations.
That night, fueled by cheap, bitter coffee and a burning desire for something other than surrender, she sat down at her computer. The legal battle was Leo’s front. Her front was information. She wasn't looking for loopholes in the contract anymore. She was looking for loopholes in the company itself.
Her fingers flew across the keyboard. As a designer, she'd spent countless hours researching competitors, digging through trademark databases, and analyzing brand filings. She treated Thorne Motors not as a legal opponent, but as a rival brand she needed to dismantle.
She started with the basics: public records. The Secretary of State’s website was a dry, uninviting portal, a digital monolith of corporate bureaucracy. She began searching for "Thorne Motors." The search returned dozens of filings: liens, tax documents, old lawsuits. It was a digital paper trail of a company that bullied its way through the world. She sifted through the data, her designer’s eye catching patterns and inconsistencies that a lawyer might overlook. The logo usage was inconsistent across different county filings. The official address seemed to shift every few years. It was sloppy. For a man with an ironclad contract, his corporate paperwork was a mess.
Hours bled into one another. The city outside her window grew quiet. 1 AM. 2 AM. Her eyes were gritty with exhaustion, but the anger was a potent stimulant. She was hyper-focused, the world narrowing to the glow of her monitor and the rhythmic click of her mouse.
She pulled up the state’s corporate entity search one more time, but this time she filtered for active business registrations. She typed in "Thorne Motors."
NO RESULTS FOUND.
Her heart skipped a beat. That was impossible. A typo. She typed it again, carefully. "T-h-o-r-n-e M-o-t-o-r-s."
NO RESULTS FOUND.
A strange, electric feeling prickled down her spine. It couldn't be. A business of that size, with that much power and notoriety, couldn't simply… not be registered. She tried variations. "Thorne Automotive." "M. Thorne Enterprises." She found a few smaller, unrelated businesses, but the behemoth that had seized her car and her future was a ghost.
Her focus sharpened to a razor’s edge. She switched to the database of expired and dissolved entities. She typed "Thorne Motors, LLC" into the search bar and hit Enter.
A single result appeared.
Her breath caught in her throat. She clicked the link, and a scanned PDF document filled her screen. It was the original Articles of Organization for "Thorne Motors, LLC," filed fifteen years ago. She scrolled down, her eyes scanning the official stamps and signatures until they landed on a single, stark field at the bottom of the final page.
ENTITY STATUS: DISSOLVED / EXPIRED. REASON: FAILURE TO FILE BIENNIAL REPORT. DATE OF DISSOLUTION: 14 MONTHS AGO.
Alina stared at the screen, the words seeming to pulse with a life of their own. For fourteen months, Marcus Thorne, the man so feared by the city's legal community, the titan of industry, the architect of impenetrable contracts, had neglected to file a simple piece of paperwork. He had failed to renew his own company’s business registration.
His arrogance was his weakness. He was so powerful, so untouchable, that he hadn't bothered with the mundane fundamentals of corporate existence. He was operating under a name he no longer had the exclusive legal right to use. A ghost corporation.
The contract Leo had been agonizing over, the predatory masterpiece of legal jargon, had been issued by an entity that, from a legal and corporate standpoint, no longer existed.
A slow smile spread across Alina’s face. It wasn’t a happy smile. It was sharp and predatory. The wall of law hadn't fallen, but she had just found a door hidden in the foundations, a door Thorne himself had left unlocked.
The name ‘Thorne Motors’ was legally available.
And she, Alina Vance, freelance graphic designer with a dwindling bank account and a heart full of righteous fury, knew exactly what to do with a good name.
Characters

Alina 'Ali' Vance

Leo Grant
