Chapter 4: The Collector

Chapter 4: The Collector

The sun bled out of the sky, pulling the last vestiges of warmth with it. The perfect houses of Harmony Creek became stark, two-dimensional shapes against the deepening twilight. Inside Lot 17, Leo paced the unblemished hardwood floors, a caged animal in a pristine, soulless box. The Notice of Imbalance lay on the kitchen counter, its crisp, cream-colored paper mocking him.

He’d tried to rationalize it. The board members were fanatics, part of a bizarre, controlling HOA that used scare tactics to maintain their absurdly high standards. They were bullies, preying on the elderly and the new. But he couldn't rationalize the look he’d seen in their eyes. It wasn’t the smug satisfaction of a bully; it was the naked, gut-wrenching terror of the prey. They weren't just enforcing the rules; they were desperately trying to appease something.

The cashier’s words echoed in his head. Invisible by sundown. He looked at the gash on the door. In the dimming light, it looked like a black, jagged scar. It was too late to fix it now. He had failed the first, unspoken test.

A dull, flat thud came from the front door. Not the musical chime of before. It was a single, percussive knock, like a stone hitting a coffin lid. It was a sound of finality.

Leo’s blood ran cold. He knew, with a certainty that defied all logic, that this was him. The Collector.

He walked to the door, each footstep an unnaturally loud thud in the profound silence. His hand trembled as it closed around the doorknob. He was an architect, a man who believed in structure, in reason, in the solid, dependable laws of physics. He was about to open the door to a world where none of that mattered. He took a deep breath and pulled it open.

The man on his porch was the most unremarkable person Leo had ever seen. He was of average height and average build, dressed in a plain, ill-fitting grey suit that could have been bought at any department store in the last thirty years. His hair was a nondescript brown, his face utterly forgettable. There were no scars, no quirks, no lines of character. He was a stock photo, a human placeholder. If he passed you on the street, your brain would delete the memory of him before you took your next step.

"Mr. Vance," the man said. His voice was the perfect auditory equivalent of his appearance: a flat, colorless monotone, devoid of inflection or emotion. "I am Mr. Abernathy. I've come to collect on the outstanding fine."

This was it. The boogeyman was a boring, middle-aged accountant. A wave of defiant anger washed away some of Leo’s fear. This was a shakedown, a grotesque piece of community theatre designed to terrify him into compliance. He wouldn’t play along.

"Right, the 'fine'," Leo said, his voice dripping with sarcasm. He reached for his wallet, pulling it from his back pocket. "I told your… associates… I was happy to pay. Just tell me the number so we can be done with this." He fanned out several hundred-dollar bills, a clear statement that he could and would buy his way out of this absurdity. "Is this enough? Or does your 'Balance' require more?"

Mr. Abernathy’s placid, empty eyes looked at the money, then back at Leo’s face. There was no recognition, no interest. It was like showing a set of car keys to a cat. The object held no value in his world.

"The payment is not monetary," he stated, his voice the same flat drone. "An imperfection was created. A payment of vitality is required to restore The Balance."

The phrase hung in the air, cold and alien. Payment of vitality. It was the most ludicrous, nonsensical thing Leo had ever heard.

"Vitality? What the hell does that even mean?" Leo snapped, his fear returning as a cold, prickling rage. "That's it. I'm done. Get off my property now, or I'm calling the police."

He moved to slam the door. He was fast, but Abernathy was faster. The man’s movement was a blur, too quick for the eye to properly track. Before the door could move an inch, Abernathy's hand shot out and clamped down on Leo's forearm.

It wasn't a grip of muscle. It was a grip of absolute cold.

A horrifying, life-altering coldness leached into him. It wasn't the simple chill of a winter’s day; it was a profound, metaphysical emptiness. It was the cold of the void, the chill of the grave. Leo felt the warmth and energy being pulled from his body, siphoned out through the point of contact. The vibrant colors of his living room seemed to grey and fade at the edges of his vision. A wave of exhaustion so complete it felt like a drug washed over him, weakening his knees. He felt his own pulse slow, his strength dissolving like sugar in water. It was the feeling of life itself being unwritten.

This was the payment.

Primal, adrenaline-fueled terror erupted in his chest. With a guttural roar, Leo threw all his weight backward, yanking his arm with a strength born of pure panic. The grip broke. He stumbled back, crashing against the wall of his foyer, his freed arm throbbing with a phantom cold that seemed to have settled deep in his bones. He felt… diminished. Older.

He didn't hesitate. He lunged for the door, slamming it shut with a deafening BOOM. His shaking hands fumbled with the deadbolt, the brass cold against his skin. He twisted it, hearing the satisfying, heavy thunk as the bolt slid into the frame. He was safe. The door was solid oak. The lock was new.

He leaned his forehead against the cool wood, panting, his heart trying to hammer its way out of his chest. He looked at his arm. It was pale, the skin oddly lax, the veins that had once stood out after a day’s work now barely visible. The cold was still there, a deep, internal ache.

He had to see. He had to know if the monster was gone.

His eye pressed against the peephole’s cool glass. The fisheye lens distorted the view, but the image was terrifyingly clear. Mr. Abernathy was still standing there. He hadn't moved. His bland face was unchanged, his expression as placid as a calm lake. There was no anger at Leo's resistance, no frustration. There was only the unnerving, patient stillness of a predator that knows its prey has nowhere to run.

Then, Mr. Abernathy slowly raised his right hand.

Leo watched, his breath catching in his throat, his mind refusing to process what his eyes were seeing. The man's fingers began to change. The flesh paled to a waxy, corpse-like white. The lines of his knuckles softened and blurred. The five distinct digits began to merge, to flow like warm wax, stretching and contorting in a silent, grotesque ballet of transformation. Bones seemed to dissolve and reform under the skin. The index and middle fingers elongated, fusing together into a long, thin shaft. The thumb and remaining fingers curled and flattened, forming the intricate, toothed bit of a key.

In the space of five seconds, the man's perfectly average human hand had become a perfect, antique skeleton key, wrought from something that looked nauseatingly like pale, dead flesh.

The key-hand moved with a smooth, unnatural grace toward the lock on Leo's door. The last bastion of his safety. The very symbol of his sanctuary.

Leo scrambled backward, a strangled cry dying in his throat. He could only watch in paralyzed horror as the tip of the fleshy key slid silently into the keyhole.

Then came the sound that shattered the last of his rational world. A soft, metallic, impossible click as the deadbolt he had just thrown was turned, smoothly and effortlessly, from the other side. The door was unlocked.

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Evelyn Reed

Evelyn Reed

Leo Vance

Leo Vance

Mr. Abernathy / The Steward

Mr. Abernathy / The Steward