Chapter 1: The Guest from Hell
Chapter 1: The Guest from Hell
The moment Leo Vance pushed through the revolving glass doors of the Grand Sovereign Hotel, the familiar hum of professional calm was gone. In its place was a thick, suffocating tension that clung to the polished marble floors and gleaming brass fixtures like a shroud. The afternoon sun streamed through the lobby's towering windows, but it did nothing to dispel the gloom concentrated at the front desk.
His two newest team members, Chloe Sterling and Mia Chen, stood huddled together, their crisp new uniforms a stark contrast to their tear-streaked faces. Chloe, usually a firecracker of cheerful efficiency, was biting her lip so hard it was turning white. Mia, the quieter of the two, simply stared at her computer monitor, her shoulders trembling with suppressed sobs. This was their first real job out of high school, meant to be an exciting step into the adult world, not a trial by fire.
Pacing behind them like a caged animal was their new manager, Marcus Thorne. His tie was loose, his brow furrowed with worry, and his movements were jerky with a mixture of impotent rage and sheer panic. He was barely a month into his position, and the deep end he’d been thrown into was clearly about to drown him.
Leo set his jaw, the usual easygoing warmth in his eyes solidifying into something colder, sharper. He strode towards the desk, his footsteps echoing in the strained silence.
"What happened?" His voice was low and steady, cutting through the anxiety.
Marcus jumped, startled. "Leo! Thank God. It's… it's a guest. Room 1201. A Mr. Harrison."
Chloe let out a choked sound, a fresh wave of tears welling in her eyes. "He's a monster, Leo. A complete and utter monster."
Leo’s gaze softened as he looked at the girls. He gently steered them toward the back office, away from the prying eyes of the lobby. "Tell me everything. From the beginning."
Once in the cramped office, the dam of their composure broke. Chloe, propelled by indignation, began the story. "He arrived three hours before check-in, demanding his suite be ready. When I politely explained that the previous guests had only just checked out, he… he threw his wallet on the counter." She gestured with a shaky hand. "His rewards card—some gold-colored Celestial Tier thing—slid out and hit Mia in the chest."
Mia flinched at the memory, hugging herself tightly.
"He started yelling," Chloe continued, her voice rising with remembered horror. "He said, 'Do you know who I am? People like you exist to serve people like me!' He called me an incompetent child when I had trouble swiping his card because my hands were shaking."
Marcus interjected, running a hand through his already messy hair. "I came out when I heard the shouting. I tried to de-escalate, offered him a complimentary drink at the bar while he waited. He just laughed in my face. He said my hotel was a third-rate dump and that he was going to have my job by sunset."
Leo listened, his expression unreadable, but a muscle ticked in his jaw. This was a classic power-tripper, a petty tyrant who got his kicks from tormenting service workers. He'd seen dozens like him. They were a virus in the hospitality industry.
"It got worse," Mia whispered, finding her voice for the first time. It was fragile, laced with humiliation. "He didn't like the way I spoke. He… he made a comment about my accent and asked if the hotel hired people who couldn't 'speak proper English'."
That was it. That was the line. Leo’s posture went rigid. He hated bullies with a visceral passion, a burning contempt born from a past he kept locked away. Abusing power was one thing; preying on the vulnerable, on a young woman just starting her career, was another entirely.
"He demanded a presidential suite upgrade for the 'inconvenience'," Marcus sighed, slumping into his chair. "He wanted the mini-bar stocked with top-shelf liquor, complimentary, of course. He wanted his dinner comped, his parking comped, everything. He kept waving that damn rewards card around like it was a royal scepter."
"I tried to tell him that as a Celestial Tier member, he gets one complimentary upgrade subject to availability," Chloe sniffed, wiping her eyes. "But the presidential suite is excluded. It's in the terms and conditions. He just screamed that the rules didn't apply to him."
"I gave him a junior suite upgrade and two hundred dollars in food and beverage credit just to get him out of the lobby," Marcus admitted, his voice laced with defeat. "He's still threatening to call corporate. A top-tier member complaint could put my career in jeopardy before it even starts."
Leo remained silent for a long moment, processing the carnage. He saw the situation clearly: two terrorized rookies, a manager trapped between policy and a customer from hell, and a narcissistic guest drunk on his own perceived importance. This wasn't just a complaint. This was an assault on his team. On his territory.
He walked out of the office and back to the front desk, his movements calm and deliberate. He sat down at Mia’s terminal, the one she’d abandoned. The two girls and Marcus followed, watching him as if he were a bomb disposal expert approaching a live device.
"Let's see who our Mr. Harrison really is," Leo murmured, his fingers flying across the keyboard.
He pulled up the reservation for Room 1201. The profile picture showed a portly, red-faced man in an ill-fitting suit—Richard Harrison. The account was flagged with the coveted Celestial Tier status. A long list of notes from other hotels scrolled down the screen, a litany of complaints and demands. This man had carved a path of misery through half the hotels in the franchise. He was a professional parasite.
Marcus leaned in, whispering, "See? He's a VIP. We have to walk on eggshells."
Leo ignored him. His eyes weren't on the complaint history or the tier status. His gaze was fixed on the fine print, the metadata of the booking that ninety-nine percent of employees never bothered to check. He scanned the booking codes, the rate types, the affiliate markers. Most of it was standard.
But then, he saw it.
A single, innocuous-looking alphanumeric code tucked away in the rate details section. A code he knew intimately. It was a designation that contradicted everything else on the screen. It was a code that shouldn't, under any circumstances, be paired with a Celestial Tier rewards account.
A slow, cold grin spread across Leo’s face. It wasn't a smile of amusement. It was the predatory, chilling grin of a shark that had just scented blood in the water. The air in the lobby, once thick with fear, now crackled with a different kind of energy. The hunter had found his prey's weakness.
Chloe, noticing the sudden shift in his demeanor, took a hesitant step forward. "Leo? What is it? What did you find?"
Leo swiveled in the chair, his sharp, intelligent eyes gleaming with a dangerous light. The friendly supervisor was gone, replaced by a calculating executioner.
"He's right about one thing," Leo said, his voice a low, smooth purr of impending doom. "The rules don't apply to him." He paused, letting the statement hang in the air before delivering the killing blow.
"Because he's been breaking all of them."
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Chloe Sterling and Mia Chen

Leo Vance

Marcus Thorne
