Chapter 8: Breaking the Circle

Chapter 8: Breaking the Circle

The phantom wearing his sister’s face smiled, and in that cold, empty gesture, Alex’s fear was incinerated by a white-hot rage. The creature had not just threatened his daughter; it had desecrated his most sacred pain, twisting the memory of the girl he’d failed into a puppet for its sick games.

“No,” Alex said, his voice low and guttural, a sound of grinding stone that surprised even himself.

The smile on the phantom’s face faltered. The Huldra’s golden eyes narrowed.

“My sister is dead,” Alex snarled, taking a defiant step forward. He was no longer a terrified man pleading for his child’s life. He was an executioner. “You are a parasite. A grave robber. And the deal is off.”

He rejected the pact. He rejected the choice. The air in the clearing crackled with tension, the ancient magic of the place recoiling from this unexpected defiance.

“Foolish,” the Huldra’s layered voice hissed, a sound of rot and winter. “The debt will be paid. Your will is irrelevant.”

The creature raised one of its long, pale arms, and the world seemed to tilt. A wave of crushing despair washed over Alex, cold and absolute. The whispers from the woods returned with a vengeance, a hurricane of self-loathing and fear inside his skull. You ran. You failed her. You’ll fail Lily, too. They’re both gone because of you. Useless. Coward. The phantom of Ruth flickered, her face contorting from a sweet smile to a mask of weeping agony. “Why did you leave me, Alex? It hurt so much.”

His knees buckled. The iron spike felt like it weighed a thousand pounds. This wasn't a physical attack; it was an assault on his soul, a direct injection of pure, magical dread. He was drowning in his own guilt.

But then, his left hand spasmed. The brittle branch of mountain ash scraped against his palm. A shield, Abernathy had said. It repels their magic.

Clinging to that single thread of hope, Alex forced his gaze up from the mossy ground. He thrust the ash branch out in front of him, a pathetic ward against an ocean of despair. “Get out of my head!” he screamed.

The moment the branch crossed the invisible threshold between them, it flared with a soft, silver light. A wave of warmth, clean and pure as sunlight, radiated from the wood, pushing back against the encroaching cold. The hurricane of whispers in his mind died to a venomous hiss, and the phantom of Ruth recoiled, its form wavering like a heat haze. The despair receded, leaving Alex gasping, his heart still hammering but his mind his own once more.

The Huldra let out a shriek, a discordant, scraping sound of pure rage that was not meant for human ears. The shield had worked. Its primary weapon had been blunted.

Enraged, the creature abandoned its mental assault and lunged. It moved with an unnatural, fluid speed, its long limbs eating up the distance between them in a single, terrifying stride. It was no longer playing a game. It was going to tear him apart.

Instinct took over. As the creature’s claw-like hand swiped at him, Alex dodged to the side and drove the heavy railroad spike forward. He didn’t aim, he just thrust it toward the towering mass.

The cold iron made contact with the creature’s leg.

The shriek that followed was a thousand times worse than the last. It was a sound of sizzling flesh and tearing magic, a visceral scream of agony that ripped through the clearing. Where the iron had touched, a plume of black, acrid smoke erupted, and the creature’s mottled skin sizzled and burned as if splashed with acid.

The Huldra scrambled back, its impossible limbs tangling, its golden eyes burning with a pain that was both physical and profound. It stared at the smoking wound on its leg, then back at Alex, its gaze filled with a new, raw hatred.

In that moment of distraction, Alex saw it.

In the very center of the clearing, resting on a flat, moss-covered stone that served as a natural altar, was the prize. A single, perfect hawk feather. Its edges were tipped with a frosty white, and it seemed to absorb the moonlight, glowing with a faint, sickly internal luminescence. It wasn't just a feather. It was the anchor. The physical form of the pact. The object of the whole, twisted ritual.

The prize for the chosen, the creature’s words echoed in his mind. Break the circle, Abernathy had urged.

The horrifying truth slammed into him. He didn’t have to kill the Huldra. He couldn’t. It was too old, too powerful. But he could break its hold. He could tear up the contract.

He feinted left, then bolted right, sprinting for the altar.

The Huldra, recovering with terrifying speed, let out another enraged screech and lunged to intercept him. At the same time, the spectral Ruth solidified again, her face no longer that of his sister, but a twisted, hateful mask. She threw herself in his path, her hands reaching for him, no longer a lure but a guard.

“You won’t take it!” she shrieked, her voice now a distorted echo of the Huldra’s.

He didn't have time to dodge. He barreled straight into her, shoving the ash branch forward. The moment the sacred wood touched the phantom’s chest, it screamed and dissolved into a cloud of black motes, like ash from a fire, vanishing into the night air.

The path was clear. He dove, his fingers closing around the feather on the altar stone.

The moment he touched it, a vile, cold energy surged up his arm, a current of pure malice. The feather felt impossibly old, humming with the stolen life of countless children. The Huldra was upon him, its clawed hand descending. There was no time to run, no time to think. He had to destroy it. Now.

He scrambled backward, slamming his back against the rough bark of a huge, ancient ash tree that bordered the clearing—a wild cousin to the small branch in his hand. Tearing the feather wouldn't be enough. The pact was sealed with a life offered. It had to be broken with a price paid. A sacrifice, not of submission, but of defiance.

He looked at the feather in his left hand, the iron spike in his right. He looked at the descending claws of the monster. And in a moment of desperate, terrible clarity, he knew what he had to do.

He pressed his left hand flat against the trunk of the ash tree, the feather pinned beneath his palm. He raised the railroad spike high with his right hand. The Huldra loomed over him, its golden eyes wide with a flicker of what looked like understanding, then horror. It was too late.

“The debt is paid!” Alex screamed, a roar of pure, cathartic rebellion.

He brought the spike down.

There was a sickening, wet crunch as the thick iron point punched through the back of his hand, severing tendons, shattering bone, and pinning the feather—and his hand—to the ancient tree.

Pain, white-hot and absolute, exploded from his hand up his arm, stealing his breath and blurring his vision. A raw, animal scream was torn from his lungs.

But his own scream was drowned out by another. The Huldra threw its head back and let out a sound that was not of this world—a shriek of unbearable agony as the foundational magic that bound it to this town was violently, brutally severed. The link, forged in blood and fear, was now broken by an act of willed, self-inflicted sacrifice.

The feather beneath his palm crumbled to black dust. The golden light in the Huldra’s eyes flickered, dimmed, and then extinguished completely, leaving only empty darkness beneath its matted hair. The creature’s form seemed to lose its substance, wavering like smoke. With a final, silent exhalation of despair, it dissolved, not into nothingness, but into the deep, hungry shadows of the forest from which it came, banished from its seat of power.

The clearing was silent. The oppressive, ancient cold lifted, replaced by the clean, sharp air of a normal autumn night. The moonlight seemed warmer. The pact was broken. The circle was shattered.

Alex hung there, pinned to the tree by the iron spike through his hand, blood dripping from his fingers onto the moss below. The world spun in a vortex of agony, but through the pain, a single, triumphant thought burned bright.

He was bleeding. He was broken. But he was alive. And Lily was safe.

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Alex Miller

Alex Miller

Lily Miller

Lily Miller

The Huldra

The Huldra