Chapter 3: Breakfast, Interrupted
Chapter 3: Breakfast, Interrupted
Sleep offered no escape. For two nights, Elara was haunted by the memory of a death that wasn’t hers. She’d close her eyes and see the world through a stranger’s dying gaze: the peeling paint, the dimming light, the feeling of being hollowed out by an absolute cold. She’d wake up gasping, her own heart hammering in a frantic echo of the vision’s terror.
She told herself it was stress. A morbid hallucination brought on by exhaustion and the grotesque nature of their new work. But the lie was a thin, threadbare blanket against the chilling certainty that she had experienced something real.
The silence in their small apartment was a constant accusation. Sarah had barely spoken to her since the motel. She spent her hours hunched over her laptop, the screen reflecting in her wide, fearful eyes as she scrolled through forums on occult symbolism and obscure folklore.
“It’s a sigil of consumption,” Sarah announced on the third morning, her voice flat and devoid of emotion. She didn't look up from the screen. “The circle we found. It’s a marker. A focal point for something that… feeds.”
Desire: Elara desperately wants to believe the last job was a one-off and that her vision was just a stress-induced fluke.
“It’s a doodle, Sarah,” Elara said, pouring coffee with a hand that wasn’t quite steady. “Some junkie with a marker.”
“There was no way to draw it,” Sarah insisted, finally looking up. There were dark circles under her eyes. “I’m not crazy, Elara. That place was wrong. Liam is wrong. He’s not just a fixer for the mob. He’s something else.”
Obstacle: Sarah's research and escalating fear directly challenge Elara's attempts at denial.
Before Elara could argue, her phone buzzed on the counter. The screen displayed ‘Unknown Number,’ but she knew who it was. The same cold dread from the motel room coiled in her stomach. She let it go to voicemail. A second later, it buzzed again. Relentless.
With a sigh of resignation, she answered. “Vance.”
“Elara. Good morning.” Liam’s voice was a smooth, warm current of charisma that felt utterly obscene in their tense, anxious kitchen. “I trust you’ve been resting. I have another engagement for you. A bit more… domestic, this time. A simple in-and-out.”
“We’re not…” Elara started to say, the word ‘quitting’ on the tip of her tongue. But then she saw the fresh pile of bills on the counter, the looming rent payment. The cash from Liam was a temporary dam against a flood that was still coming.
“The address has been sent to your phone,” Liam continued, as if her hesitation was irrelevant. “The compensation will be transferred the moment you confirm the job is complete. I do hope this becomes a fruitful partnership for all of us.” He hung up before she could form another protest.
Sarah was on her feet, her face pale. “You’re not going.” It wasn’t a question.
“The rent is due, Sarah,” Elara said, her voice hard. “His money is the only thing keeping a roof over our heads.”
“I’d rather be homeless than work for him again!” Sarah’s voice cracked. “Didn’t you feel it in that room? Don’t you understand what we’re cleaning up after?”
I do, Elara thought, the ghost of a dead man’s terror clinging to her. Better than you can ever imagine.
But she couldn’t say that. Admitting it would make it real. It would validate Sarah’s fears and shatter the fragile armor of pragmatism she wore. “It’s just a job,” she said, the lie tasting more bitter each time she said it. “Now suit up.”
Action: Forced by financial necessity, Elara accepts the job, dragging a protesting Sarah along.
The address led them to a quiet, tree-lined street in a neighborhood that screamed upper-middle-class comfort. Manicured lawns, two-car garages, a child’s bright blue tricycle abandoned on a pristine driveway. It was the polar opposite of the Starlight Motel. This was a place of PTA meetings and neighborhood barbecues, a place where the worst thing that happened was someone’s sprinklers watering the sidewalk. The mundane setting made the knot in Elara’s stomach tighten. Monsters felt more at home in the shadows, not under the bright morning sun.
The front door was unlocked, just as Liam’s text had promised. They stepped inside into a Pottery Barn catalog. The air smelled of lemon polish and faintly of coffee. Family photos lined the hallway: a smiling man with kind eyes, a beautiful woman, a little girl with a gap-toothed grin.
“See?” Elara whispered, more to convince herself than Sarah. “It’s normal.”
But Sarah shook her head, her gaze fixed on the polished hardwood floor. “Nothing about this is normal.”
They found the source of the job in the kitchen.
It was a beautiful room, flooded with sunlight from a large bay window that overlooked a lush green backyard. On the round oak table sat a scene of interrupted domestic bliss. A bowl of cereal with half-sliced strawberries. A copy of the morning paper, folded open to the crossword puzzle. A coffee mug with the words ‘#1 DAD’ printed on it.
And sprayed across the white cabinetry, the stainless-steel refrigerator, and the cheerful yellow wallpaper was the brutal, shocking evidence of an execution. It was a single, devastating blast, a close-range shotgun wound to the back of the head. The chair where the man had been sitting was splintered, and the floor beneath was a ruin of blood and biological matter.
The contrast was sickening. The profane violence felt a thousand times worse here, amidst the evidence of a happy, loving family. A child’s crayon drawing of a smiling sun was stuck to the fridge, its corner stained with a crimson spray.
Turning Point: The scene's domesticity makes the violence personal and deeply unsettling.
“Oh, God,” Sarah choked out, stumbling back into the hallway. “His family…”
Elara felt a wave of nausea. She stared at the ‘#1 DAD’ mug, at the half-finished crossword. This wasn’t an anonymous junkie in a sleazy motel. This was a father, a husband. He’d been starting his day just like any other.
She fought down the bile in her throat. “Protocol, Sarah. Just focus on the protocol.”
They worked in a horrified haze. Every tool they unpacked, every sheet of plastic they laid down felt like a desecration. Sarah cleaned the cabinets with a silent, tear-streaked face. Elara tackled the worst of it, the area around the table. She kept her eyes down, focusing on the mechanics of the job, trying to block out the photos on the fridge, the tricycle on the lawn. She avoided touching the personal items, cleaning around them, a strange and illogical act of respect.
She was scraping the last of the biological matter from the floor when her glove brushed against the leg of the table. It wasn't much. Just a fleeting contact. But it was enough.
Surprise: The vision hits, and it's stronger and more debilitating than before.
The world dissolved into a cacophony of agony and betrayal.
He was sitting at the table, the warmth of the coffee mug seeping into his palms. The taste of toast and marmalade was on his tongue. He was smiling, thinking about his daughter’s soccer game this afternoon. 7-across, a four-letter word for ‘portent.’ Omen.
A familiar voice from behind him. “Morning, David.”
He turned, still smiling. “Liam. What are you doing here? I thought we weren’t meeting until—”
The smile on Liam’s face was the last thing he saw clearly. It was a warm, friendly smile, but it didn’t belong here. It was the smile from his nightmares, the polite mask of the monster he fed.
There was no loud bang. Just a sound like the world tearing in half, a deafening roar that was inside his head. A colossal, concussive force slammed into him, and his universe became pure, white-hot pain. There was a brief, horrifying sensation of his own thoughts, his memories, his love for his family, being blasted out of him like chaff in the wind.
His last coherent thought was not of pain or fear, but of a single, agonizing image: his daughter’s smiling face.
Elara screamed, a raw, guttural sound of shared agony. She collapsed to the floor, clutching her head, the phantom pain of the gunshot exploding behind her own eyes. The smell of coffee and gunpowder filled her senses. She could feel the man’s—David’s—love for his daughter, a love so fierce it was a physical ache in her chest, and then the absolute, annihilating void where it had been.
Result: The vision devastates Elara and exposes her secret to Sarah.
“Elara!” Sarah was there, shaking her, her face a mask of terror. “Elara, what’s happening to you? Talk to me!”
Elara scrambled away from her, crab-walking backwards until her back hit the clean cabinets, her breath coming in ragged sobs. “He knew him,” she gasped, the words tumbling out of her, unfiltered. “He was smiling… Liam… he called him David…”
The color drained from Sarah’s face. She stared at Elara, not with concern now, but with dawning, horrified understanding. “The motel room,” she whispered. “When you fell… it happened there, too, didn’t it?”
Elara couldn’t answer. She could only rock back and forth, trying to push the dead man’s final moments out of her mind. The secret was out, and with it, the last barrier between them and the terrifying truth of their situation.
Ending Hook: The rift between the sisters becomes a chasm.
Sarah stood up, her expression hardening from fear into a cold, sharp anger. The shared trauma didn't unite them; it exposed the chasm that had been growing between them.
“This whole time,” Sarah said, her voice shaking with betrayal. “You knew. You knew it was more than just cleaning. You felt it. And you lied to me. You dragged me here, into this man's home, knowing what this work does.”
“I was trying to protect you!” Elara cried, the words sounding hollow even to her own ears.
“Protect me?” Sarah laughed, a bitter, broken sound. “By lying? By making me think I was going crazy? Look at you, Elara. Look at what this is doing to you. This isn’t a job. It’s a curse. And you just invited it right into our lives.”
She backed away towards the door, stripping off her contaminated gloves. “I’m done. I don’t care about the money. I’m done with this, and I’m done with you letting this happen to us.”
Sarah turned and fled, leaving Elara alone in the sun-drenched, blood-stained kitchen, shivering with the residue of a dead man’s life and the terrifying weight of her own curse.
Characters

Elara

Liam
