Chapter 3: The Haunted Man
Chapter 3: The Haunted Man
Sleep was a luxury Carina couldn't afford. The motel room’s air conditioner rattled a frantic, off-beat rhythm, a poor substitute for the psychic hum that had taken root in her skull. The world Jon had unveiled—a world of Veils and monsters, of secret wars fought in the shadows—felt less like a revelation and more like a diagnosis for a madness she'd carried her whole life.
She sat on the edge of the stiff motel bed, her Glock disassembled on the nightstand, her hands methodically cleaning pieces she knew were already spotless. It was a ritual, a familiar catechism of steel and oil that kept the impossible at bay.
“The Crimson Cipher,” she said into the dim light, the name tasting alien on her tongue. “You said it was my father’s legacy.”
Jon, propped up on pillows on the other bed, shifted with a pained grunt. “It’s hereditary. A rare genetic quirk in your bloodline. Your father learned to control it, to weaponize it. He described it as a… supernatural data interface. A way of reading the universe’s source code where it’s been corrupted by things from outside.”
“He never told me.” The words were a bitter accusation.
“How could he?” Jon countered, his voice gentle but firm. “'Honey, the reason you sometimes get migraines and feel like the world is screaming is because you can see the math behind reality, and by the way, there are monsters who want to eat that part of your brain.' He was protecting you. He wanted you to have a normal life.”
“And look how that turned out,” Carina scoffed, snapping the slide back onto her pistol with a sharp, definitive click. She’d chased his ghost right back into his secret war.
She closed her eyes, trying to force the memory of the crimson text to the surface. It was like trying to recall a dream, fragmented and slippery. But as she focused on the case, on the cloying wrongness of Bonners Ferry, a flicker of red sparked behind her eyelids. A dull ache began to throb behind her right eye.
“It’s happening again,” she said, her voice tight.
“Don’t fight it,” Jon advised, his voice low and steady. “Focus. Aim it. It’s a muscle you’ve never used. Point it at the problem.”
The problem was the Hive. She pictured the creature from the basement, the way it moved, the psychic shriek it emitted. She thought of the missing Miller family, of her father’s mangled body. The ache in her head intensified, coalescing into a single, sharp point of light.
And then, the text bloomed in her mind’s eye, crisp and clear against the darkness. It wasn’t the torrent of information from before. It was a single, targeted data packet.
[ACTIVE PSYCHIC RESONANCE DETECTED] [SOURCE: VINCENT O’CONNELL] [DESIGNATION: BEACON] [OBJECTIVE: INVESTIGATE. ISOLATE. ANALYZE.]
The light faded, leaving her breathless, the name and the designation burned into her memory.
“Vince O’Connell,” she said, opening her eyes. The motel room looked exactly the same, but her perception of it had been fundamentally altered. She wasn't just an FBI agent anymore. She was a divining rod for the damned. “The Cipher is flagging him. It called him a… beacon.”
Jon was already swinging his legs off the bed, his movements careful but purposeful. “A beacon. Damn it. The Hive isn’t just hunting. It’s setting up a network.” Within minutes, he had a name and an address from the Bureau’s database. Vincent O’Connell. Thirty-two years old. A history of petty theft, public intoxication, and a recent string of disorderly conduct charges. He lived in a trailer park west of town.
The drive was quiet, the sky a bruised purple in the pre-dawn light. “Beacons are how it spreads its influence,” Jon explained, his knuckles white on the steering wheel. “It finds someone sensitive, someone already cracked, and it wedges itself into their mind. It uses them as a broadcast tower, amplifying the psychic static that weakens the Veil and makes people… suggestible. More compliant.”
“So this Vince is one of its puppets? A cultist?” Carina asked, the tactical part of her brain taking over. This was familiar territory. A suspect. An objective.
“Unlikely,” Jon said grimly. “Willing servants are rare. Most are just victims, screaming on the inside.”
Vince O’Connell’s trailer was at the edge of the park, leaning like a tired old man against a stand of skeletal pine trees. The windows were covered with tinfoil, and the air around it was thick with the stench of stale beer and paranoia. Carina’s headache flared as she stepped out of the car. The static was strong here.
She knocked on the flimsy door, announcing their presence. “FBI! Mr. O’Connell, we need to talk to you.”
A frantic shuffling came from within, followed by a weak, reedy voice. “Go away! I ain’t talking to anyone! She won’t let me!”
Carina and Jon exchanged a look. “She?”
Carina kicked the door. The lock, barely more than a suggestion, burst from the frame, and the door swung inward.
The inside of the trailer was a chaotic shrine to terror. Every surface was covered in frantic charcoal drawings on scrap paper, napkins, and even the walls themselves. They were all of the same two things: a vast, swirling blackness that resembled the scribbled monster from the Miller kid’s drawing, and a girl. A stick-thin girl with long, stringy hair, drawn over and over, always in a simple red dress.
In the center of the chaos sat Vince O’Connell. He was a wreck of a man, gaunt and pale, his eyes wide with a sleepless terror that went beyond simple fear. He was haunted, hollowed out from the inside. This was not a monster. This was a man being eaten alive by his own mind.
“You have to make her go away,” he whimpered, shrinking back from them. “She’s always so cold. She whispers from the static.”
Carina’s FBI training told her to take control, to read him his rights. But the throbbing in her skull told her that was the wrong move. She knelt, keeping her movements slow. “Who, Vince? Who whispers?”
“The girl,” he sobbed, pointing a trembling finger at the hundreds of drawings. “The girl in red. She came first. She promised she could help me find what I lost. But she lied. She just opened the door for… for the hungry dark.”
As Carina looked at the pathetic man, the Crimson Cipher flared again, unbidden. This time, it wasn't just text. Her vision shifted, the world resolving into layers of data. The grimy trailer became a wireframe, and Vince O’Connell glowed with a faint, sickly psychic energy. From the center of his chest, a shimmering, crimson thread—a filament of pure energy—stretched outwards, through the wall of the trailer and off into the distance, a leash connecting him to an unseen master.
[ANALYZING… PARASITIC PSYCHIC LINK] [BEACON STATUS CONFIRMED. HOST IS UNWILLING.] [SOURCE OF INITIAL CORRUPTION: RESIDUAL PSYCHIC ECHO. TAG: ‘RED GIRL’]
The overlay faded. Carina blinked, the world snapping back to its ugly, mundane reality. She now understood. The Hive wasn't just a predator; it was insidious. It didn't just smash through the door. It found a lost soul like Vince, someone grieving or broken, and had this ‘Red Girl’ whisper promises through the cracks in his sanity. It offered a hand, and when he took it, it dragged him into hell and used his soul as a lighthouse to guide its hunger.
The hunt was no longer just about vengeance for her father. It was about saving men like Vince. It was about the faces in the dark that no one else could see.
She stood up, her gaze meeting Jon’s. “He’s not our enemy. He’s the bait.”
She turned back to the terrified man and his hundreds of sketches of a ghostly girl. "Vince," she said, her voice imbued with a new, strange authority. "Tell me everything you know about the girl in red."
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Carina Keel

Jon Canopus
