Chapter 8: An Awakening in Hell

Chapter 8: An Awakening in Hell

Heat was the first thing. A suffocating, stagnant heat that clung to his skin like a wet shroud, baking the dust in his throat and making every breath a conscious effort. It was the heat of a sealed attic in late summer, thick with the weight of its own stillness.

The second thing was the smell. It was the same odor he had noticed at the barn’s entrance, but magnified a hundredfold, no longer a faint suggestion but an overwhelming, physical presence. The cloying sweetness of rot was the base note, a deep, pervasive stench of old meat left too long in the sun. Layered over it was the sharp, metallic tang of rust and the sterile, chemical bite of bleach, a futile attempt to scour away a history that had soaked into the very wood and concrete. His stomach churned, a useless rebellion in a body that had nothing left to give.

Then came the pain. A dull, pounding ache throbbed behind his eyes, the lingering hangover from the tranquilizer. But it was the other pain, the sharp, focused agony, that brought him fully, horribly awake. It was centered on his wrists. A cold, unyielding pressure bit deep into his flesh.

Eli’s eyes snapped open.

He was in the barn. But he was no longer a visitor, an apprentice admiring the master’s workshop. He was an exhibit.

Dim light filtered through the cracks between the old wooden slats of the walls, painting the dusty air with hazy, splintered stripes. His head was slumped against the rough, splintery wood of the wall behind him. He tried to lift a hand to wipe the grit from his eyes, but his arm wouldn't obey. It was yanked taut, held fast by something cold and heavy.

He craned his neck, his muscles screaming in protest. His arms were stretched wide above his head, pulled at an agonizing angle. His wrists were locked in heavy iron manacles, the kind he had seen hanging from the steel pegs on the wall. The chains attached to them ran upwards, disappearing into the shadowy, cobweb-choked rafters he had admired just hours—or was it days?—ago. He was shackled to the very structure of the building, a part of its grim architecture.

Panic, raw and primal, clawed its way up his throat, a shrieking animal that threatened to overwhelm the cold, analytical part of his mind. He yanked at the chains, a convulsive, desperate movement. The iron cuffs bit deeper, grinding against bone, sending a fresh wave of searing pain through his arms. The chains rattled, the sound a pathetic, impotent noise in the vast, silent space. It was the same sound he had heard as Mike dragged him from the trailer, a sound that now represented the final, absolute loss of his own agency.

He was the machine now. Strapped down, immobilized, waiting for the engineer to arrive. The irony was so profound, so complete, that a hysterical laugh threatened to bubble up with the panic. He, Eli, the intellectual predator, the student of control, had been outmaneuvered with a cheap can of beer. He had been so mesmerized by the shared philosophy that he failed to see he wasn't being courted as a partner, but sized up as a prime cut of meat.

His frantic gaze darted around the barn, seeing it all with new, terrified eyes. Across the concrete floor, the tools hung on the wall in their neat, orderly rows. The saws. The cleavers. The hooks. They were no longer instruments of a shared, higher purpose. They were a menu.

And there, in the center of the vast space, sat the concrete slab. His altar. It waited, patient and solid, its faint stains seeming to darken in the gloom, hungry for a new offering. The leather straps looked almost black in the dim light.

Hours bled into one another, a slow, torturous drip of time measured only by the shifting bars of light on the floor and the deepening ache in his shoulder sockets. He tried to think, to analyze, to find a flaw in his prison, but the drug’s lingering fog and the overwhelming physical misery made concentration impossible. His superior intellect, the one thing he had always valued, the tool he believed set him apart from the herd, was useless against two loops of forged iron.

The sun crept across the sky outside, and the heat in the barn intensified, turning the airless space into an oven. Sweat trickled into his eyes, stinging them. Thirst arrived, a small nuisance at first, then a burning, rasping demand that scraped his throat raw and swelled his tongue. He thought of the ice-cold beer, the delivery system of his own damnation, and a fresh wave of self-loathing washed over him.

As dusk began to settle, painting the cracks in the walls with the soft, bruised colors of twilight, a profound despair set in. The panic had exhausted itself, leaving behind a hollow, desolate certainty. He was going to die here. Mike wasn’t coming back. He had simply chained him up and left him, a biological experiment left to run its course. He would desiccate in the heat, his body a feast for the flies that buzzed lazily in the rafters, another secret for the silent, hungry barn to keep.

Night fell. The last vestiges of light vanished, and he was plunged into a darkness so complete it felt solid. The world shrank to the circle of his own pain, the sound of his own ragged breathing, the frantic, terrified thumping of his own heart. Time ceased to have meaning. There was only the aching darkness.

And then, a new sound.

It started as a low, distant rumble, a vibration he felt more in his teeth than heard with his ears. It grew steadily louder, resolving itself into the familiar, guttural sound of a truck engine.

Eli’s head snapped up. Hope and terror warred within him, a nauseating cocktail of emotion.

Two beams of brilliant white light suddenly sliced through the darkness, cutting through the cracks in the wall opposite him. The twin daggers of light swept across the barn's interior, illuminating a billion dancing dust motes, and for a moment, they fell directly on him, pinning him like a terrified animal, before sweeping past.

The engine cut out.

The silence that followed was heavier, more pregnant with meaning, than any that had come before. Eli held his breath, straining to hear.

Crunch.

The sound of a single footstep on the gravel outside. Slow. Deliberate. Unhurried.

Crunch. Crunch.

The footsteps grew closer, each one a hammer blow against the anvil of his heart. They stopped directly outside the massive sliding door. There was a faint metallic scrape, the sound of a key in a heavy padlock. A loud click echoed in the night.

The great wooden door groaned, a low, deep complaint of stressed wood and rusted rollers as it began to slide open. A rectangle of lesser darkness appeared, a deep indigo against the absolute black of the barn. And in the center of it, a silhouette. A man’s shape, broad-shouldered and solid, blotting out the faint starlight behind him.

The silhouette stepped inside. The door rumbled shut, sealing them both in the tomb-like blackness.

Eli didn’t breathe. He couldn’t see anything, but he could feel the presence across the cavernous space. He could feel the weight of that calm, predatory gaze on him in the dark.

A sharp, metallic click echoed from the center of the barn.

The industrial floodlights flickered on one by one, their loud, electrical buzz filling the silence. The barn was instantly flooded with a harsh, merciless light, brighter and more sterile than any sunlight. Eli squeezed his eyes shut against the painful glare.

When he forced them open again, blinking away the spots, he saw Mike. He was standing by the concrete slab, one hand still on the light switch. He was wearing a fresh flannel shirt and clean jeans. He looked rested, calm, as if he were just starting his workday. His face, illuminated from above by the harsh lights, was a mask of placid neutrality.

He looked across the floor at Eli, chained and broken against the far wall. He took in the scene with a detached, professional air, like a painter assessing his canvas before the first stroke.

Eli’s lips parted, a dry, rasping sound emerging from his throat, a plea that was not yet a word.

Mike offered him a small, thin smile that held no warmth, no humor, only a chilling, absolute control.

“Breathe, Eli,” he said, his voice calm and even, cutting through the buzzing of the lights. “We’re just getting started.”

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