Chapter 10: The Brand of the Unworthy
Chapter 10: The Brand of the Unworthy
The world had become a minefield of reflective surfaces. Leo learned the art of avoidance, a tense choreography he performed daily. He would drink water from his plastic cup without glancing at the sheen on the liquid’s surface. He kept his gaze fixed on the ceiling when a nurse rolled in the polished metal cart for his blood pressure check. He learned to talk to his mother by focusing on the soft fabric of her sleeve rather than the faint glimmer in her worried eyes. He was a prisoner in a cell lined with mirrors, and he knew, with a certainty that was eating him alive, that a monster was looking back out of every single one.
The vision in the television screen had been the turning point. The superimposed horror of the Adjudicator’s form, the clear, booming thought slammed into his mind: <ANOMALY.>
. It had cauterized any lingering hope that he was suffering from a simple, understandable trauma. This was not post-traumatic stress. This was a post-mortem haunting.
His days were now a performance. He forced himself to eat, to walk the few agonizing steps the physical therapist demanded, to answer the doctors’ questions with a veneer of weary normalcy. Inside, he was a raw nerve, perpetually scanning, listening for the faint multi-toned whisper, watching for the twitch of a shadow that moved too fast. He had to appear sane. He had to get stronger. He couldn't fight from a hospital bed, and he knew, with chilling certainty, a fight was coming.
This morning, the obstacle was a cheerful, middle-aged nurse named Brenda. She had a kind, no-nonsense face and an efficiency that was both comforting and terrifying. “Alright, Mr. Martinez,” she said, snapping on a pair of latex gloves. “Let’s get these old dressings off and see how that beautiful chest of yours is healing up. Doctor’s pleased with the progress on your ribs.”
Leo’s heart began to pound a painful, frantic rhythm against those very ribs. He was laid bare on the bed, vulnerable, while she worked. He squeezed his eyes shut, not wanting to see the reflection of the overhead lights in her protective goggles.
“Just breathe for me, nice and easy,” Brenda soothed, her voice a placid stream in his torrent of panic.
He felt the gentle tug of medical tape, the cool air hitting his skin as she peeled back the sterile gauze pads covering the center of his chest. There were surgical incisions there, he knew, from where they’d had to relieve the pressure in his chest cavity after the crash. He braced himself for the sight of angry red lines and purple bruising.
Brenda worked in silence for a moment. The methodical snipping of scissors and the crinkle of discarded wrappings suddenly stopped. The silence stretched, becoming heavy and charged. Leo’s dread intensified. He could feel her presence, her stillness. She wasn’t moving.
“That’s… odd,” she murmured, her voice losing its cheerful, professional cadence. It was replaced by a note of pure, clinical confusion.
Leo’s eyes snapped open. He pushed himself up slightly on his elbows, ignoring the searing protest from his muscles and bones. He looked down at his own chest.
The surgical scars were there, healing as expected. The bruises were a mottled landscape of sickly yellow and deep purple. But beneath them, laid over his heart, was something else. Something that did not belong.
It wasn't a bruise or a scar, not in any medical sense. It was a faint, intricate pattern that seemed to be etched into his skin, not on it. It was a swirling, spiraling design of impossible complexity, like a nebula or a golden galaxy captured under a thin layer of flesh. The lines were a pale, shimmering gold, and as he stared, he felt a dizzying sense of vertigo. The pattern seemed to shift, to writhe with a slow, languid life of its own when he wasn’t looking at it directly. The moment he tried to focus on one specific swirl, it would seem to settle, becoming just a faint, peculiar birthmark.
“Was this here when you were admitted?” Brenda asked, leaning closer. Her professional curiosity overrode any fear. “I don’t remember seeing this on your intake chart.”
Leo couldn’t answer. His throat was constricted. He was staring at the impossible made manifest. This was a piece of the other place. This was a mark left by the Adjudicator. The memory of its golden, feathery form pulsed in his mind, and the pattern on his chest seemed to resonate with the thought.
Brenda, ever the professional, straightened up. “Let me just check your file.” She went to the small computer terminal in the corner, her fingers tapping on the keyboard. Leo watched her, his gaze flicking from her back to the brand on his chest. It was real. A nurse could see it. It wasn't in his head. The validation was a cold wave of relief immediately followed by a tsunami of terror.
“No,” Brenda said, turning back, her brow furrowed. “Nothing. No mention of any birthmarks, tattoos, or scarring in this area pre-op. Just the initial trauma. I’m going to page Dr. Evans. He’ll want to see this.”
She left the room, leaving Leo alone with the horrifying proof branded over his heart. Hesitantly, he reached out a trembling hand and touched it. The skin was smooth, unbroken. And it was cold. Not just cool to the touch, but unnaturally cold, like a patch of skin that the life and warmth of his body couldn't quite reach.
When the doctor arrived, he was just as perplexed. Dr. Evans, a man in his fifties with an air of unshakable calm, examined the mark with a small penlight. He prodded it gently. “Fascinating,” he said, more to himself than to Leo. “It presents like a form of post-traumatic pigmentation anomaly. Sometimes severe physical shock can cause strange cellular reactions. We’ll document it and keep an eye on it. Nothing to be alarmed about, son.”
Nothing to be alarmed about. The words were so absurd, so profoundly wrong, that Leo almost laughed. They saw a medical curiosity. He saw the signature of his would-be executioner.
Later, after they had gone and a fresh bandage was placed over the mark, Leo lay in the silence, his mind racing. The mark was proof. Concrete, physical proof. But what was it? A scar from his rejection? A remnant of the energy that had slammed him back into his body?
An experiment began to form in his terrified mind. He needed to know.
He closed his eyes and deliberately, forcefully, summoned the memory he spent every waking moment trying to suppress. He pictured the dark television screen. He pictured his own reflection fracturing. He pictured the hundred shifting, multi-faceted eyes staring out at him. He focused on the surge of pure, undiluted terror that had accompanied the vision. He let the fear wash over him, not fighting it, but embracing it, stoking it. His heart rate monitor began to beep faster. His breathing grew shallow.
And then he felt it.
Beneath the bandage, a slow, spreading warmth emanated from the mark. It wasn't the searing heat of an infection or the burning of an injury. It was a clean, living heat, like cupping a small, sleeping bird in his palm. The cold spot on his chest was now a source of gentle, unnerving radiance.
He opened his eyes, a horrifying realization dawning.
The mark wasn't just a scar. It wasn't a passive remnant. It was active. It responded to his fear.
The whispers on the edge of his hearing. The shadows that moved too quickly. The visions in reflective surfaces. And now, this brand. They weren't just random, terrifying events. They were a system. The Adjudicator was using his fear to watch him, and his fear, in turn, was activating this… this thing on his chest.
It was a beacon.
He hadn't just been rejected. He had been branded. Tagged like a wild animal. The Adjudicator hadn't lost him; it had simply put a tracking collar on him. And the battery for that collar was his own terror. Every time he felt the fear of being hunted, he sent out a ping, a bright, warm signal flare into the cosmic dark, screaming, Here I am. The anomaly is right here.
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Leo Martinez

Sarah Martinez
