Chapter 5: The Rot Within
Chapter 5: The Rot Within
The scream that had been trapped in Alex’s throat finally tore itself free. It was a raw, ragged sound, less human and more animal—the shriek of a creature caught in a trap it cannot comprehend. He scrambled backward, kicking and clawing at the bathroom floor, his mind a white-hot nova of pure terror. He didn't stop until his back slammed into the hallway wall, the impact jarring his teeth.
The eye. The goddamn eye.
The image was burned onto his retinas, a permanent afterimage that flickered every time he blinked. The sickly yellow sclera, the web of blood-red veins, the muddy iris. And the excitement. He could still feel the sheer, predatory thrill that had radiated from it, a palpable wave of psychic energy that had promised a world of pain. It wasn't just a monster; it was a sentient being that had been watching him, waiting. It knew him.
He lay there, panting on the floor, for how long he didn't know. Minutes bled into an hour. The rational part of his brain, the part that dealt with spreadsheets and paid bills on time, was gone. Annihilated. In its place was a primal, terrified thing whose only command was: contain it.
With a surge of adrenaline-fueled purpose, Alex staggered to his feet. He ran to the hall closet, the one where he’d found the flashlight, and tore it open. Behind a stack of yellowing newspapers, he found his father's old toolbox, a relic from a time when Alex had thought he might one day own a house and fix things. He ripped it open, scattering wrenches and sockets across the floor until he found what he was looking for: a hammer and a box of three-inch nails.
He returned to the bathroom door, his new tools clutched in his hands. He wasn't thinking, only acting. He slammed the flimsy wooden door shut. The sound was a thunderclap in the silent apartment. He took one of the long, thick nails, positioned its point against the wood of the doorframe, and brought the hammer down.
BANG!
The impact shuddered up his arm. The nail bit into the wood. He hit it again. And again. A furious, frantic rhythm of survival.
BANG! BANG! BANG!
He hammered the first nail home until its head was buried in the splintered pine. He grabbed another, positioning it a few inches down. He wasn't just sealing a door; he was performing an exorcism. Each nail was a word in a desperate prayer. Stay. In. There. He hammered nails along the entire length of the doorframe, then across the top, and finally, crouching, along the bottom. He didn't stop until the box was empty and the door was a brutalist sculpture of steel and ravaged wood.
He stepped back, his chest heaving, the hammer hanging limply in his hand. The door was sealed. The tomb was shut. He was safe. For now.
The days that followed were a descent into a new kind of hell. Alex’s world shrank to the confines of his living room and kitchenette. The barricaded bathroom door was a constant, looming presence, a monument to his terror. He tried not to look at it, but his eyes were drawn to it, imagining the eye on the other side, pressed against the keyhole, watching, waiting.
Life without a bathroom was a grim, logistical nightmare. He washed himself at the kitchen sink, using a cold, greasy trickle of water and a dish rag. He bought a case of bottled water, terrified to drink from the tap, convinced every drop was contaminated with its essence. He used a bucket for a toilet, emptying it in the dead of night into the dumpster behind the building, a furtive, shameful act that made him feel like a ghoul.
The oppressive summer heat cooked the apartment, and soon, a new smell began to compete with the city’s stench of hot garbage. It was the smell of him. Of stale sweat, unwashed clothes, and fear. His small apartment became a terrarium of his own decay, a prison of filth he had built for himself.
His work life, the last pillar of his fragile normalcy, began to crumble. He went to the office smelling faintly of sour laundry and desperation. He avoided the communal kitchen, the water cooler, anywhere people might get too close. His coworkers, who had once barely registered his quiet presence, now gave him a wide berth. They would whisper as he passed, their glances a mixture of pity and disgust.
One afternoon, a woman from accounting named Sarah, who had always been kind to him in a distant, professional way, stopped by his cubicle.
"Alex?" she said, her voice soft. She kept a careful distance. "Are you… are you feeling okay? You don't seem yourself lately."
Alex looked up from his monitor, his eyes bloodshot from lack of sleep. Her concern, which a week ago might have felt like a lifeline, now felt like an interrogation. Did she know? Could she smell the truth on him?
"I'm fine," he clipped, his voice a low rasp. "Just busy."
"It's just… well, if you need to talk to someone, HR has resources…" Her words trailed off as she took in the full sight of him—the gaunt face, the haunted, anxious eyes, the faint but undeniable odor of neglect.
"I said I'm fine," he repeated, turning back to his screen, his knuckles white on his keyboard. He felt her hesitate for a moment before she retreated, the soft click of her sensible shoes fading down the aisle. The chasm of his isolation widened. Even kindness could no longer reach him.
That night, huddled in the glow of his laptop screen, a thought sparked in the wreckage of his mind. He couldn't be the only one. This thing, this ancient, watching entity… it couldn't exist only in his apartment. In a world of billions of people and trillions of miles of pipes, someone else, somewhere, must have seen it.
His fingers flew over the keyboard, clumsy and desperate. He started with simple searches: "creature in pipes," "eye in shower drain." The results were useless—links to B-horror movies, plumber advertisements, and stories about alligators in sewers. It was all a joke.
He dug deeper, using the language of his terror. "Drain is watching me." "Something touched me from the drain." "It licked my leg."
He clicked through pages of forgotten forums and dead websites. And then he found it. A hyperlink, deep in a thread about urban legends, colored a faded purple from a visit years ago by some other lost soul. The site was called "The Subterranean Echo." It was a relic of the early internet, with a plain black background and stark white text. It was a message board, seemingly defunct, with the last post dated seven years prior.
The threads were cryptic, their titles like fragments of a nightmare. The Thirsting Grate. The Weeping Wall. Glimpses in the Gutter.
Alex clicked on the first one. His heart pounded as he read.
User: Aquaphobe_99 (Posted 12 years ago) It's not a blockage. The plumber said it was clear. But I hear it. At night. A wet, sliding sound. Like something impossibly large moving through a space far too small.
User: PipeDreamer78 (Posted 10 years ago) Don't look. Whatever you do, DO NOT LOOK. I made that mistake. It has a gaze. It is not an animal. It is ancient and patient and it enjoys the fear. Seeing it is an invitation.
Alex’s breath hitched. It enjoys the fear. The memory of the eye quivering with excitement flashed in his mind. This was it. This was real. He wasn't mad.
He scrolled frantically, devouring the fragments of terror left behind by these other haunted souls. They were scattered across years and continents, but their stories all pointed to the same impossible truth. They spoke of a cold touch, a strange pressure, a feeling of being watched from the plumbing in their homes. He had found his people. They were a scattered, anonymous congregation of the damned.
A profound, horrifying sense of validation washed over him. He wasn't alone. But the relief was instantly poisoned by a new, creeping dread. The scope of this horror was far wider than his own grimy apartment. This was something ancient, a secret parasite living in the circulatory system of the civilized world.
He found one final post, at the bottom of a thread, from a user whose account had since been deleted. The post was a simple, chilling reply to someone who had spoken of sealing their bathroom.
User: [deleted] (Posted 8 years ago) You think a door will stop it? You think nails are a ward? You don't understand what it is. It is of the water. It flows. Your walls are sand. Your locks are suggestions. It will come out when it is ready.
Alex stared at the words, the pale light of the screen illuminating the sweat on his brow. He slowly turned his head, his gaze falling upon the barricaded bathroom door across the room. The rows of nails gleamed faintly in the dark. They had seemed so strong, so final.
Now, they looked like stitches on a wound that was already beginning to fester from within.