Chapter 7: The Day of Reckoning
Chapter 7: The Day of Reckoning
The second time Leo Vance faced Marcus Thorne across a tribunal room, the atmosphere was entirely different. The bland, government-issue space was the same, the humming fluorescent lights were the same, and the adjudicator, Ms. Albright, wore the same stern expression. But the palpable tension in the air could have been cut with a knife. This was not a preliminary skirmish. This was the final showdown.
Alistair Finch, looking haggard and stripped of his former bravado, sat ramrod straight, a mountain of legal files stacked neatly before him. He avoided looking at Leo. Marcus Thorne, however, did not. He sat beside his lawyer, his expensive suit looking even tighter than before, his face a mask of barely controlled contempt. He stared at Leo with undisguised hatred, a predator forced to acknowledge an animal it had mistaken for prey.
Leo sat alone at his table. He wore the same simple button-down shirt. His only companion was the thick black binder, which sat closed before him like a sleeping beast. He was calm, his breathing even, his observant eyes taking in every detail. He was not here to fight. He was here to conduct an execution.
“Mr. Vance,” Ms. Albright began, her gaze resting on him. There was a flicker of something new in her eyes today: curiosity, perhaps even respect. “You are the applicant in this matter. You may begin.”
Leo stood. He didn't raise his voice. He didn't need to. "Thank you, Adjudicator. The matter before you is simple. For a period of four months, my landlord, Apex Properties, engaged in a systematic pattern of neglect that rendered my unit uninhabitable, while simultaneously levying a series of punitive and baseless fees. This resulted not only in significant financial and property loss, but in the constructive eviction of my two roommates."
He opened his binder. The rustle of the page turning was the only sound in the room.
"I will not waste the tribunal's time by repeating every detail in this binder, which has been submitted as evidence," he continued, his voice a steady, dispassionate monotone. "Instead, I will draw your attention to a simple timeline. Exhibit A."
He walked the adjudicator through it, his finger tracing a line in the air. "On May 5th, Apex instituted a fifty-dollar 'Property Administration Fee.' On May 7th, my refrigerator failed. This is maintenance ticket #734, which went unanswered for seventy-eight days. Here, in Exhibit B, are the receipts for the cooler and ice my roommates and I were forced to purchase. Total cost: one hundred and twelve dollars."
Finch began to shuffle his papers, preparing a counter-argument. Thorne’s jaw tightened.
"On June 3rd," Leo went on, "Apex instituted a twenty-five-dollar 'Landscaping Beautification Fund' fee. Here, in Exhibit C, are photos of the unmaintained grounds, taken on June 4th. On June 19th, the water heater began to fail. This is ticket #751, which remains unresolved to this day."
He was dismantling them piece by piece, not with emotion, but with the cold, hard logic of their own incompetence. He used their own corporate jargon against them, turning their petty fees into damning indictments.
"And finally, on August 11th, a pipe burst. Ticket #812. The landlord’s response was to send a plumber who patched the pipe but left behind a water-damaged, mold-infested living room. Here, in Exhibit D, are photographs of the damage, the mold growth, and my former roommate Chloe’s portfolio, destroyed by the water. She was forced to vacate the premises on August 20th. My other roommate, Ben, left three days later, citing the unlivable conditions."
He paused, letting the weight of those words settle in the silent room. He looked at Thorne, whose face was beginning to flush with color.
"They did not just neglect a property, Adjudicator. They destroyed a home."
It was too much for Marcus Thorne. His carefully constructed veneer of corporate superiority shattered. He shot to his feet, slamming his hand on the table.
"This is an outrage!" he boomed, his voice echoing in the small room. "He's a professional tenant, a parasite! Look at him! He orchestrates this whole thing, gets his friends to leave, just so he can try and live rent-free! He knows the system and he’s playing you for a fool!"
Alistair Finch’s face went white with horror. He tugged at his client’s sleeve, hissing, “Marcus, sit down!”
Ms. Albright slowly took off her glasses and placed them on her desk. She fixed Marcus Thorne with a gaze so cold it could have frozen magma. "Mr. Thorne," she said, her voice dangerously quiet. "This is not your boardroom. Your personal opinion of the tenant’s character is irrelevant. Your failure to repair a burst pipe, however, is the entire point of this hearing. Sit down. Now. One more outburst and I will hold you in contempt."
Thorne stood frozen for a moment, his chest heaving, his mouth half-open. Then, under the crushing weight of the adjudicator’s authority, he deflated, sinking back into his chair like a punctured balloon. The blotchy red on his cheeks was darkening to a shade of angry purple. He had not only lost control; he had proven Leo’s entire point. He was a bully, accustomed to power and intimidation, and utterly lost when faced with structured accountability.
Ms. Albright turned her attention back to Leo. "Mr. Vance," she said, her tone now formal but clear. "You are seeking a rent abatement for the period of neglect, an order compelling repairs, and the return of all fees paid. Is that correct?"
"It is," Leo said. "For the four-month period beginning in May."
The adjudicator nodded, her decision already made. She picked up her pen and began to write. "The evidence presented by the tenant is overwhelming, meticulously documented, and frankly, shocking. The landlord, Apex Properties, has shown a pattern of bad-faith dealings and a flagrant disregard for their legal obligations to provide a safe and habitable residence."
She looked directly at Marcus Thorne, her eyes filled with undisguised contempt. "Charging tenants a 'service surcharge' for a service you are failing to provide is not just unethical; it borders on fraud."
Thorne looked as if he’d been slapped.
"Therefore," Ms. Albright announced, her voice ringing with finality, "I am ordering a full rent abatement for the four months in question."
Finch let out a quiet sigh of relief. It was a total loss, but it was over.
"Furthermore," she continued, "given the severity of the neglect, the health hazards posed by the mold, and the landlord's contemptible behavior, I am awarding the tenant an additional five months of rent as a punitive measure."
Finch’s head snapped up. Thorne’s jaw dropped.
"A total of nine months' rent, free and clear," Ms. Albright clarified, looking Thorne dead in the eye. "And, of course, an order for all repairs to be completed by a certified contractor within fourteen days. Judgment for the tenant."
She banged the gavel. The sound was like a thunderclap.
Nine months. An unprecedented victory. It was more than a refund; it was a punishment, a financial wound designed to hurt a company that only understood the language of money.
For a long moment, no one moved. Marcus Thorne sat completely still, his face a grotesque, mottled purple, his fists clenched so tight his knuckles were white. He was a statue of pure, impotent rage. The master of the universe had been brought low in a drab government room by a quiet young man with a binder.
Leo calmly closed his files. He stood, slid his chair back under the table, and put the binder back in his worn messenger bag. He gave a slight, respectful nod to Ms. Albright, who returned it with a look of grim approval.
He turned and walked out of the room without a backward glance. He didn't need to gloat. The silent, trembling fury of the man he was leaving behind was victory enough. As he stepped into the hallway, he saw Sarah Jenkins waiting, her hands twisting nervously. He met her gaze, and for the first time in a long time, the tired, predatory look in his eyes softened. He gave her a small, almost imperceptible nod.
He walked out of the tribunal building and into the afternoon sun, a quiet man leaving a legend in his wake. The hunt was over. Justice, cold and sharp and absolute, had been served.
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Leo Vance

Marcus Thorne
